Awesome! Samira has claimed Spike as her own, and he really enjoyed himself with her. And Aziza's gonna do all she can to get her time with Spike no matter what. Until then she's got plenty of 'toys' to satisfy her until she gets the real thing.

‘ By Netuna … those mares squandered him .’ Samira was shocked that not only did those ponies have such a stud in their midst but didn’t even take his first time. The queen couldn’t help but feel sorry for Spike that those pony mares didn’t give him a chance, but it was soon replaced with a great sense of victory and eagerness. She would be Spike’s first woman and she will proudly hold that title. ‘ Seems I just hit the jackpot. I always enjoyed taking less experienced lovers. Makes the whole event more fun. Much more fun.’

Huh? For once, I agree with her. The part where the Mane Six ( Specifically Rarity ), Starlight, Trixe, and the other mares are naive, super idiotic fools for missing out a super chad like Spike.

As they continued to listen in on their princess’ fantasy pleasure, the third maiden couldn’t help but bring her hand into her lower garments and begin to rub... “Let's hope he has the stamina for it.”

Don't underestimate him. And don't worry, you won't be disappointed.

P.S. I do love the Boobjob and Blowjob.

1. Deciding to put what Samaria just said in the back of his head for now, Spike just gives into the kiss once again and firmly wraps his arms around her, much to Samira’s delight. The two went at for nearly half an hour before they both separated for air, a long trail of saliva between their mouths. After catching their breaths, they both crawled over to where the pillows were, and Samira gently pushed Spike down on one of them. She then proceeded to take off his shirt and started working on his trousers with the drake blushing like crazy.

   As Samira slowly pulls down his pants, Spike’s dragonhood sprang up at attention. Her eyes widened at his girth, it was almost seven inches and had a somewhat chubby appearance which is surprising considering his lean build, but the rod was lined with barbs, clearly for the purpose of stimulating great pleasure within a female’s love tunnel. His pair of testicles are just as impressive, both were almost as big as apples and the jackal queen could actually hear them churning and sloshing with seed. Spike was blushing up a storm right now with his cock and balls exposed to such a beautiful and exotic woman.

   The highlighted parts are in present tense.

2. "Your very welcome Spike." Samira smiled back, "That said, I believe it's finally time for the main event." She said as she removed her thong. Her now exposed pussy was puffy and wet with anticipation. Most of all, it was gold amber like her eyes.

   It's "You're".

3. "Ok." He replied with a blush when Samira called him that. After all, he never really experienced such affections before.

   You don't need the "s" here.

4. "Princess, is everything all right?" One of her handmaidens asked as she stepped in, "I heard some noise and I thought I - BY THE GODS!!!" She screamed when she saw her princess laying naked on the bed.

   And I thought Starlight forgets to knock.🙄

5. We're still left with the issue of the Mane 6 & the Princesses searching for Spike. Will they find that message and eventually him?

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The highlighted parts are in present tense.

I don't know what that means.

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For instance, you used the present tense for the part,

Spike just gives into the kiss

when it should be

Spike just gave into the kiss

If you're writing this story in the past tense, make sure you keep it consistent.

From what the butterscotch pegasus described, fish were practically mindless creatures and many of her attempts to try and communicate with them ended in failure. So, she didn’t seem to get particularly upset when the bear and otters eat them.

Uh…wasn’t there a fish Fluttershy was particularly attached to? From the IDW Comic with the pirates?

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Oh yeah! Almost forgot about number five.

For Samira's sake, she will have to give out a h-u-g-e apology, and explain her situation with her kingdom to them. And hopefully, they WON'T get jealous. Because technically, it's their own damn fault for being naive virgins and didn't ask Spike out!

Worth the wait indeed. Spike certainly both got and gave a nice ride there. Now to wait and wonder who is next lucky lady and how worried mane6&comppany are from ”trying to find him” to ”causing an pandemoniun”. Oh, and then there’s the mysterious threat and if it might try to spread beyond jackal desert?...

Keep up the good work

Great chapter. Hope to see more. Well worth the wait.

Very nice chapter.

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter

Personally, I would love for Aziza to be next, and the timing would be when the Mane 6 finally are ablw to figure out where Spike is...the conflict between her and Rarity is gonna be delicious. Think about it; in a way both Rarity and Aziza are the Sparity phenomenon but in two sides of the coin. And despite the obvious flirting, Aziza knows she wants Spike and is a matter of time, whereas Rarity has Spike in her proverbial back pocket and did not act at all and took him for granted. Im pretty sure Spike, even with his patience, has a limit and the girl that actually has some attraction to him will bed him like Samaria just did, but the excuse of being a savior is gonna be less and less the main reason.

TL/DR: Rarity, and a lot of other ponies, have lost their shot at Spike, and they do not even know it. Starlight may still have a minute chance though. This also could be way early, but I could even see Spike staying with the Jackals even if Celestia and the Main 6 finally arrive...experience with a species that treat Spike as equal instead of a curious anomality will have lasting consequences for ponies...

Samira smiled at this before saying, “Why don’t you take a seat at my bed, Spike. There’s something I like to show you.”

Update pls

I am absolutely loving this so far!

While I enjoy myself a good harem fic especially one with spike getting some gods damned credit for being the best guy he is. The logical fallacy of how this entire plan has happened and how there's these huge plot holes that make the Celestia in your story's tits look tiny in comparison make it very very hard to suspend my disbelief even for the sexy stuff.

Ponies have been shown to be able to track magic teleportation the faintest particles or at least Starlight can as that's how she explained following Twilight all over if I recall. Not to mention teleporting magic isn't exactly subtle as you're ripping a damn hole in space time to make portals.

Now the whole it's magic I don't gotta explain shit argument might work if the show hadn't proven that it isn't easy for the layman though it is doable so how is it the Element of Magic, Starlight, and the Princess of the Mfing Suns (nice tits Celly btw) can't track a portal spell not even a few hours old?

I get that you want stakes but you can't throw out the "this will lead to war if they get caught" card and then also put the idiot ball in everyone's hands. It's immersion breaking and that's not good. Hard to focus on the sexy stuff if you're constantly asking "Hey wait a damn minute. How's that even make sense?"

But this is however all just my opinion on the matter. As the story showed potential before it just turned into this huge cluster of "wait... How did nobody notice that, and Why is everyone holding the idiot ball so tightly it's gonna pop?" That I read through every chapter up till now.

In conclusion a.k.a. tl:dr Good sex scenes, story linking them needs more cook time and duct tape the size of Cellys tits for dem plot holes though. Or: I couldn't turn my brain off to enjoy the lewds but it was pretty good otherwise.

I’m curious to see what the jackal queens niece looks like

Pardon me for asking so, but I was just wondering if Ember might get involved in the search?

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I'm afraid not. But NetherTempest and I do have plans for her in a later entry in Spike's World of Harems, so look forward to that.

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Gotcha. Is there a link for that? I can't find it

God this was an amazing chapter