Samira wasn’t lying when she allowed Spike to write a letter to Ponyville but what she didn’t say or what Spike didn’t specify was that she would send the letter directly to his friends…
I hate the ruler. She's bieng an idiot. I mean, I get bieng desperate, but do your research lady!! Yo ushould hav eknown he was friends with not one, but four alicorns!!
Awesome job. Celestia's not happy her baby has been abducted. Spike himself is willing to at least go through with the queen's plan. Sadly his letter to the girls wound up in the wrong spot in Ponyville.
10978340 I have a feeling either Eris or Fluttershy czn get this message before anypony else, but my money is on Fluttershy. After all, the letter has shown up on the edge of the Everfree, and that is decidedly Fluttershy's turf. But there is still more in store.
Also we see that there is a possible civil war on the Jackal Kingdoms hands due to the lack of males and the urgency to save the race. I get Queen Samira is a bit scatterbrained with how thing start up, but I hope she develops the more she interact with Spike.
Finally, Princess Aziza really seems a lot like Sparity, but in reverse--she's the one that got the crush on Spike at first sight...unlike canon with Spike seeing Rarity for the first-ever episode of FiM. Definitely keeping an eye on it, especially when the ponies (specifically Starlight Glimmer and Momlestia) arrive on stage and meet Queen Samira and the other Jackals. Something's telling me that Spike will not be a virgin when the ponies arrive...just sayin'...
At the very edge of the Everfree Forest, little animals were going about their usual ways in nature but a golden flash caused a magical scroll to pop out of nowhere, scaring the animals into fleeing.
On the outside of the scroll had a little message: “From: Spike.”
Samira wasn’t lying when she allowed Spike to write a letter to Ponyville but what she didn’t say or what Spike didn’t specify was that she would send the letter directly to his friends…
Wonderful...
She doesn't want Spike to be found, does she? What are the odds of anyone finding a random letter at the edge of the Everfree??
Does Samira not realise she's risking WAR with Equestria by whisking Celestia's adopted son away to a secret nation to be a breeding stud behind his family's and friends' backs!?
She remembers a couple times when she wore this outfit to a meeting and nobles, both male and female, usually excused themselves for "bathroom breaks" and they would come back a bit later sweating and breathing heavily.
“I already have something put in place if he does wish to send a letter.” Samira responded. “Whether he tries to do so in secret or asks to do so, the letter will just end up back to him. Same thing would happen if the ponies tried to send him a letter.”
"And she wasn't interested in the breeder whatsoever." One of the maids quietly snarked to another who just nodded her head in response. Aziza whipped her head around, staring venomously at the maids, causing them to freeze. Even Spike, Shunkara, and the guards were a little frightened by this.
Samira wasn’t lying when she allowed Spike to write a letter to Ponyville but what she didn’t say or what Spike didn’t specify was that she would send the letter directly to his friends…
10978955 Samira is risking potential war with Equestria due to kidnapping a ruler's son regardless of the reasons why. As they say, the road to hell or ruin is paved with good intentions. Cluelessly, she is not aware of a potential revolt because her rule unfortunately has her species on the point of extinction...and increasingly more jackals want a change in rule.
I have to wonder what happened to the male jackals to slowly die out...
Honestly I hope shit backfires spectacularly on these Jackals for what they've done. Hope Tia drops the sun on them. But knowing what kind of story this is, it won't happen, and for some reason the Mane 6 and Tia will magically come to the conclusion that this is ok, as ponies are wont to do.......
“Countess Neith.” Samira said, though beneath the courtesy, a mild form of hostility was within her tone. “I see you have gathered a meeting… without my consent or knowledge. Again!“(——
“But why do I have to go to this meeting? It’s just a gathering full of stuffy nobles and snobs.” Aziza complained like a child as Samira continued to hold her ear.
In his chambers provided by his royal host, Spike constantly paced around his luxury suit of a guest room. His entire thoughts were on his situation, what it meant for him and what were his options. Spike couldn’t deny that he was sympathetic with their situation. The zenthians are desperate to save their kingdom and species. If he were in the same position as Samira, he probably would do anything to save those he cared about. Further, he doubted that all of his friends would allow their friend to be used as a breeding stud. So it's likely that even if Samira did ask for his help without kidnapping him, his pony friends wouldn’t allow it. Heck, Twilight would’ve had a meltdown if such a request was made.
But, as the saying goes, It is better to act decisively and apologize for it later than to seek approval to act and risk delay, objections, etc.
Huh, she literally signed her own death warrant!
I hate the ruler. She's bieng an idiot. I mean, I get bieng desperate, but do your research lady!! Yo ushould hav eknown he was friends with not one, but four alicorns!!
Awesome job. Celestia's not happy her baby has been abducted. Spike himself is willing to at least go through with the queen's plan. Sadly his letter to the girls wound up in the wrong spot in Ponyville.
Darn. It would seem like it was one those "you need to be more specific with the target location"-message sending spells.
Keep it up.
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I have a feeling either Eris or Fluttershy czn get this message before anypony else, but my money is on Fluttershy. After all, the letter has shown up on the edge of the Everfree, and that is decidedly Fluttershy's turf. But there is still more in store.
Also we see that there is a possible civil war on the Jackal Kingdoms hands due to the lack of males and the urgency to save the race. I get Queen Samira is a bit scatterbrained with how thing start up, but I hope she develops the more she interact with Spike.
Finally, Princess Aziza really seems a lot like Sparity, but in reverse--she's the one that got the crush on Spike at first sight...unlike canon with Spike seeing Rarity for the first-ever episode of FiM. Definitely keeping an eye on it, especially when the ponies (specifically Starlight Glimmer and Momlestia) arrive on stage and meet Queen Samira and the other Jackals. Something's telling me that Spike will not be a virgin when the ponies arrive...just sayin'...
She doesn't want Spike to be found, does she? What are the odds of anyone finding a random letter at the edge of the Everfree??
Well this was an interesting turn of events.
You gotta be kidding me…
Oh no!
Wow. That went fast, didn’t it?
Oh boy…
Good chapter
A paradise to some and a nightmare to others! I wonder if they have a way to curtail the bad genes from the good ones.
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Well with a body and attire like this:
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Can you really blame them?
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“Nope.” — Big Mac.
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Still, wearing something “risqué” to a meeting?
Guess they don’t make dresses, or business suits, like they used to, huh? Lol
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Well we all know how much of a troll Tia can be sometimes.
When is the next update?
Update?
Loving this story, wonder if they'll find the letter. Can we expect an update anytime soon?
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Samira is risking potential war with Equestria due to kidnapping a ruler's son regardless of the reasons why. As they say, the road to hell or ruin is paved with good intentions. Cluelessly, she is not aware of a potential revolt because her rule unfortunately has her species on the point of extinction...and increasingly more jackals want a change in rule.
I have to wonder what happened to the male jackals to slowly die out...
Honestly I hope shit backfires spectacularly on these Jackals for what they've done. Hope Tia drops the sun on them. But knowing what kind of story this is, it won't happen, and for some reason the Mane 6 and Tia will magically come to the conclusion that this is ok, as ponies are wont to do.......
Kettle, meet pot. News flash: you're black too.
But, as the saying goes, It is better to act decisively and apologize for it later than to seek approval to act and risk delay, objections, etc.