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The Changeling Hives. Ever since their first unification over 20 years ago, they have been a nation of mystery and danger to the ponies of Equestria. Led by the One Queen Chrysalis, she has made the hatred towards the pony nation a cornerstone of the new changeling society, and now moves towards a new plan, a Great War that will engulf the continent. She will have her honor restored, or her and all changelings will die trying.

But what of the lower queens of other hives? While not in the limelight, they still have to lead their subjects and deal with the day-to-day governing of massive cities. And while Chrysalis may lead them all to victory, these minor royals still have their stories to tell.

Set in the world of the popular Hearts of Iron IV mod Equestria at War.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 13 )

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

I have a changeling admiral OC if you want to see. (No I won't ask you to incorporate them here)

Very good start cant wait for more

While reading the dialogue between the admirals I had to think of this image:
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- Unlimited submarine warfare, you say?
- It's impossible to resist the Equestrian fleet directly. We must use our natural trait - stealthiness.


Promising story so far!
I look forwards to see where it goes.

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Yaaay your still here in so happy this is alive also I love this chapter and what ever direction this story gose know that I will read comment and love this story because it's amazing and your amazing stay safe and happy my friend

Damn. This kinda sucks. Poor little things.

Love addiction is a very serious thing that causes reduced mental capabilities in most cases. It is why you should all train your magic without using it, to avoid it becoming a crutch. It is my belief that all of you can one day rival even a unicorn in magical talent, without the use of Love, if you put your minds to it.

And if you add a drop of love to boost yourself for a moment victory is certain.

It made it easy to see all the way across the lake to the other side, where the coastline marked the beginning of polar bear territory. A race and nation which, if the One Queen Chrysalis' words rung true, would become one of the first targets towards changeling greatness and the conquest of Equus...

Polar Bears: *chuckles* "We're in danger."

Some ponies were in green hibernation pods sleeping soundly, others were getting things like their cutie marks and mane colors documented, and a few were even stumbling out a back door assisted by a changeling student. All were here voluntarily;

I wonder how they convinced the ponies to play along with this.
Maybe a generous stipend?

It's only been pulled off once, and even then Princess Twilight Sparkle discovered the deception before the wedding even started. It's not happening.

A changeling disguised as a stunning stallion (or mare) tried to woo the princess?


Good chapter!
I enjoyed reading it and look forwards to what else you had planned.


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awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

But why did you insert this chapter in the middle instead of the end of the story?

Will there be one for the Queen of Vraks?

Awesome fic, I'm hardly awaiting the next chapter.
Good luck writing.

:-)

I'll still wait patiently but I hope to see an update in the future but I'll continue to wait patiently

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