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hoodini667


playing cards listing to music and writing story and can get distracted very easily

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summoned as [The Gamer] warrior Dragonheart finds himself in Equestria
hopefully, there are loopholes for warrior because this is on the horizon; a danger looms

references so far -Yu-Gi-Oh, Jojo's bizarre adventure kingdom hearts (notified me if there is any more)

Chapters (1)
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I turn off your computer.

Good thing I don't use a computer then!

I turn to the rest of your room, next to the chair on one of the bedside tables, which had a small basket of body care in it and the manga books.

Um... are sure that is THE READER'S bedroom?

...not care you turned back to the desk where you have your laptop and your Yu-gi-oh code talker deck on the desk. I put the top of the laptop down with a sigh of resignation.

Ok... that's definitely not my bedroom.

I wonder, 'Is there anything exciting to happen in my life?' I let out another sigh; with your luck, it will be either a marriage or a funeral; I know your chance it's going to be the latter.

I'm starting to think you keep switching between the MC and the reader...

I get yourself ready for bed as soon can as you have pale white skin brown hair; your eyes were a mix of green, blue and brown you were on the weighty side, and you fall asleep to wake up suddenly as you look around, it looks like your room but slightly off for some reason.

Yep, you are.

Other than switching perspectives randomly, this a pretty great story, or at the very least, a great first draft.

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