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Famouslyanonymous


The thing I hate most is when a good story gets ruined by adding a herd/harem

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The last thing I expected was to wake up to find me and my house has been transported to an alternate universe in a nation called Equestia that’s inhabited by anthropomorphic ponies. But I'm not the only thing that got to Equestria. Other things from alternate universes start to show up here too. Imagine my shock when I find out that some of the objects brought to Equestria were things that I thought were fictional!?

Note: This is not a herding fic. I am a new writer so expect a few mistakes. Also if you dislike the story, please give me a reason why.

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Not too shabby so far but IMO maybe write out more so your chapters ends less abruptly/ Feels like the idea or scene was not completed

Like I said just IMO

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