Our world is just one of many. The story of a man exploring a new world, into which he fell through the conceived idea of the royal sisters. And also the stories of other characters in this world, combined into one plot.
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Pastel colors.
But I changed the description to a more understandable one.
Odd, considering I actually have sweet tea with me right now...
No way...ancestor to Derpy?!
Holy crap, Human heart path better prepare, because the Amira train is coming at mach speed!
Loved the chapter, man! you can tell how much work you put into this!
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Thanks for the comment my friend!
Yes ... I also remember writing and drinking 20 cups of coffee in 4 days. It was during this period that this chapter was written.
Amira is now my waifu! And she will still have many of her POVs. She's on her private ship!
Derpy ancestor. This idea appeared back in chapter 11 when I described the forest battle and the arrival of the scouting mares under the mare's command. And this mare was described exactly the same appearance as Derpy!
Before that, Sandy Glow played a supporting role, but now she has acquired a special meaning. She befriended Amira and became her personal bodyguard. Here we need to think about how to describe the plot with her, in order to explain much more clearly how she could be the ancestor of Derpy.
I would like to ask you personally. How did you feel about that mare who sells magic items?
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The mare that sells magic items reminded me of how trixie got her alicorn amulet in season 3. It was a decent thing to add, and makes me wonder about the black market of such things
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What are you talking about?
I never put such ideas into this mare or anything like that! Are you sure you are reading this chapter?
The time to read such a chapter is about 2 hours.
I did not expect such a reaction ... Because the meaning was not in the very presence of such a character (who, by the way, has nothing to do with the black market and sells legal magical things). After all, the meaning of this scene is how Amira was able to receive the "Ring of Great Devotion". And as a result, she has been wearing this ring for over 700 years!
And that's not to mention the fact that Amira herself had to earn money to buy gifts for her two stallions! Doing what she can do.
But at the same time, the mare herself (the owner of the store) admits that she has a hobby in her free time. She writes history!
In general, it is this ring that is the key moment of this entire chapter, but the plot and details have already lined up around it, which were written as Memories Amira!
Personally, I like the part where Amira performs in front of a pony with an Oriental Dance.
Yes, it really is fate ...
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My friend, I didnt mean that she sells black magic, I was merely curious about how that sort of business would work. I apologize for the confusion.
Amiras dance was easily one of the better parts of the chapter though.
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Okay, you're forgiven, my friend! By the way, a little later, expect me to comment on the next chapter.
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Alright! I shall await the comment!
Предыдущая глава - флешбек 700 летней давности заканчивается.
Эта глава - флешбек 700 летней давности начинается.
Enough focusing on the past... Instead, let's focus on the past!
Ох уж эти пони, то у них зенитные ПВО, то стволы толкают в эпоху античности.
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Хахах! Да, не Братан, это просто была Глава посвященная Амире, и ее взгляд на то событие. Но после этой главы, уже начнутся главы в Реале.
Ну ты загнул про зенитки! 🤣
Ты за седня, чтоль прочел главу? Ну и как тебе Танец Амиры?
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На самом деле, этот арбалет, который купила Амира, для Квик Страйка, выглядит примерно так:
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