Our world is just one of many. The story of a man exploring a new world, into which he fell through the conceived idea of the royal sisters. And also the stories of other characters in this world, combined into one plot.
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At the moment I am already working on the 2nd chapter and am planning about 7-8 thousand words. So there will be an update in the coming hours. I also want to decorate each chapter with a few pictures, they should help the imagination.
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Damn! Im hyped Will he have contact to earth? Will he or his assistance fullfill the mission? What will await this brave science adventure?
The next update will be higly anticipated ♡
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Черт! Im раздутый Будет ли он иметь контакт с землей? Сможет ли он или его помощник выполнить миссию? Что ждет вас в этом смелом научном приключении? Следующее обновление будет долгожданным ♡
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Im getting VR gaming vibes I noticed you mention only the Gloves power limit. I guess the VR glasses have a seperate powersource?
Sounds like 'suicide' training
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Совершенно верно! Я просто решил не давать полную сводку о характеристиках каждой игрушки которую он возьмет с собой.
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маленький намек на спойлер, для следующей главы.
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Ok
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O crap the pony have anti air defense... That rough Basicly:
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Да но во первых он имеет ограниченный боезапас и его калибр меньше. Иначе в него не сможет столько влезть, хоть он и по размеру примерно как Биг Мак. А во вторых такую систему можно применять и по наземным целям!
И что бы это не казалось все таким простым на взгляд читателя, Логика проста. Как вы сами снарядили бы экспедицию в неизвестность?
Лучше послать одного хорошо оснащенного человека и одного робота. И возможные человеческие жертвы сойдут к минимуму. Только для одного. И чтобы он не был уж совсем один с ним есть робот помощник!
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Я использовал шилку в игре Operation Flashpoint. Они зверь против воздушных и наземных целей.
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Признаю честно! Такая Шилка стоит в нашем парке в 5 минутах ходьбы от моего дома.
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музейный экспонат?
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Скорее всего отправленный на пенсию дослуживать свои годы в качестве экспоната! 10 лет назад я окончил службу в армии и эти Шилки, Тунгуски все еще несли службу в части. Да так к слову поверишь мне уже 31 год?
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one hell of a maintenance is needed if they ever return to activ duty. Oil dont take to kind to decades of standing around i hear.
How interesting...
You should correct that error, it is very confusing, I don't know if it is the scientist or Maxi who is speaking
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Yes, I have seen this error. I'll fix it now. I found it during this time. And thanks for telling me!
maybe you meant Luna of Equestria?
wouldn't a traveler be better?
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that's what i meant! From Equestria! But since I write this through Google, I did not immediately pay attention to such idiocy! In general, I have already worked more closely on the following chapters. Since I got a friend who gives me hints on text errors.
Well....being cut off from the outside world should be a worry considering you have no idea how bad things are probably gonna get.
Oh thats not worrying...
Nevermind last comment, this is every bronies dream!
Nah, I feel like C3PO would be a better fit.
Cover your ass...Hehehe, man that response was funny to read.
This whole chapter has left me with several ideas on what "heart path" will be doing in equestria. I can't wait to see if those ideas stick or not.
Can definitely tell English isn't your first language, the way things are worded sometimes sounds like some weird B-movie lines haha.. But it's still quite readable, and so far quite interesting. I'll definitely be watching this with much interest.
Okay ease off the exclamation marks already. Not every other sentence needs them. Most statement with the exclamation marks are statements not exclamations. Even excitable people don't talk and think like that.
Great chapter. Good overhaul of grammatic
OH! PLEASE! Tell me I can do something like:
CLOAK ENGAGED
&
MAXIMUM ARMOR
If so, that would be so good
also, this night fog
reminds me of a certain robot named Ethan
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Is that a Crysis reference?