Our world is just one of many. The story of a man exploring a new world, into which he fell through the conceived idea of the royal sisters. And also the stories of other characters in this world, combined into one plot.
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Can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work.
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I will continue. But what, for example, did you like about this chapter?
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The main hero finally connecting the dots.
Discord chaos!!
Main heroes brother moment.
I can't wait when Shining Armor finds out that his wife has a sister.
Wait a minute in this world did Chrysalis ever had her way with shining armor.
I feel like there should be a bad joke in this situation.
You know I'll be surprised that Chrysalis doesn't get Knocked Up by the human After All She can breed with other species.
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Seriously, this is turning into a real drama! I'm also interested to find out what awaits all these characters in the future.
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I was wondering has our hero ever met up with Blueblood yet.
I always love stories where the pompous rich kid gets sent across the room by the hero.
But if I have to say it is so strange that I come across stories where Blueblood never shows up even if the hero is living at the Castle.
This reminded that this series severely ignores Centaurs as a whole. We have Tirek, but there's little backstop on his kind. Cool to see them here in a fit though.
You set these scenes up so well, brother! During the rescue scene earlier I found my heart racing, all the while I know find myself worried about Chrysalis and Cadences well beings as if I am a part of the story myself, which I am sure is one of your goals as a writer.
Oooooooooo, the plot thickens. I wondered where you were going with this, and I'm intrigued to say the least. The whispers of Heart Paths previous life still linger to this day.
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Thanks for the comment, my friend!
You're really right. My goal was to convey the plot in a way that was sensitive and dramatic.
This whole story had interested me from the start. In the beginning it was awesome.So I bench read it the last week or so. But, I have been waiting for so long for a human(in human form not as a unicorn I mean) x Equestrian Princess(es) to return. You know with fingers and hands and such. Or Amire x that same human. I predict next chapter after the second part will be POV back in equestria with the preparation there, or Amira making her trip to equestria or something else? So many switching of POV. I understand you want to show how every character is experiencing it, but with so many and still adding new. Some have almost been forgotten.
Crystalis have had so many intimate experiences with him in sooo many different forms. However some like Trixie or Luna have had barely any. I understand the mane 6 seem to be banned from this story, but even Zacora is not present at all. Also he did promise anal to the Kirin or throne encounter with Celestia. I'm still hoping for throne encounter with well... every princess on HER own throne and in front of others. Maybe at the same time as in luna and celestia passed out on their thrones after one thurough and exausting combined sesssion? All those sounded incredibly fun! Those are just toughs of mine.
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I swear to you! It was the most amazing and inspiring comment ever!
But don't lose heart, I'm still continuing my work on this story. The main character is waiting for a lot of adventures (according to my plan), including intimate games in his style! But you just need to remember that Heart Path will not know peace for too long. There's always something going on. Romance or adventure, or maybe another, revealed secret of this world. All this will not leave the reader without curious attention.
You really guessed right in your predictions. The next chapter, according to my plans, will belong to Amira.
And I have not forgotten about the punishment of the Kirins for their audacious act! So all this is expected in 2022!😉
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If I was going to lose heart, it would have been long time ago. xD
Here is another guess of mine. That might be true or could inspire. Didn't Heart Path have some offesive guns in his equipment, or was it only in the robot's? Whichever it was, I know they have limited ammo in this world. All this time I wondered how they can make more, if they had no gun powder. And here comes the kirin's leader that KNOWS how to make it. Is there or will there be a way to create more ammo this way. Then came Casance with her arrows that can explode demons.Can they like make bullets enchanted with her power of love, like the arrow themselves? I'm pretty sure they can also probably charge the equipment, either with kirin's lightning, or at least eventually with celestia's sun power for the solar panels!
One last thing, can the kirin's punishment also be used on Celestia and Luna in front of the stuck up nobles? So curious what they would say or think. Might need to be careful or at least warn the guards, so they don't try to capture Heart Path again. Yet maybe that could be interesting too. Again it's your story, so you decide which way it goes. :)
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Ahaha! I thank you for your comment, and most importantly for how attentive you are to the development of the plot.
All the technologies that will be provided in this world will have their reasons. But the main character still has an "Emergency Suitcase" (which is located in the Kanterlot Palace), which contains a Glock-20 and ammunition. (And perhaps something else, provided that it is not completely known). And also his robot has a lot of information from our world, and this, for a moment, if you imagine, makes it possible even to create a tank (In the presence of previous technologies and metals). So it will all be in the future plot. A plot that will compete with "The Diaries of a Madman"!
And your most intriguing question concerns "punishment"...
My answer: The main character, the Way of the Heart, is not vindictive. However, he will not miss such moments! Especially when the Royal Sisters will be standing in front of him. Therefore, all the nobles in the Canterlot Palace will be stunned when they see this for the first time in their lives. And at the same time, Celestia and Luna will finally be able to breathe the air of freedom and love. But... I've had enough of spoilers.
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I love spoilers, for myself at least!
However .... the roboy can make a TANK? He sooooo needs to do that at some point. It will be awesome! He could probly even make a plane, for himself to fly or at least to show some equestrians ... like twilight? Even a tank could be awesome! That might just be me and wishful thinking!
PS: I never meant anything for him in a vindictive way. I meant it like they do in quotes. It would be strange if it was otherwise!
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Of course I understood what you meant by quotation marks. So the penalty points system (which he came up with) will decide by which method and for which mare, this very punishment will come. I just hope he doesn't die from sex! Ahah!😅
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I guessed it can end him too. However he has a tool in his pants, 2 hands and a tongue! He can service 4 mares at a time, if he wants. I did that in one role-playing session a few years back. When there were too many females that needed ... help! Heart path almost did it in his own present session, but I think he under used his hands and decided to concentrate only on one mare! :( I know he can do more! Plus he is not like a stallion that does things fast and then he is done for the day. Humans can recharge much faster! :) Humans with "Celestia's blessing" or similar thing from kirin's alchemy and herbs! I can't even imagine the limits!
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If you only knew how hard I had to write that very scene in chapter 29. I set myself a difficult task: to keep a balance and not turn the whole story into pornography. However, I don't like to miss such scenes, and every time, I try to write as many details and effects as possible. And yes! Initially, my plans were to use his hands and body, especially his hands, to the maximum, but such a scene could drag on for tens of thousands of words. But, I already know what I'm going to do in the next chapters... believe me, it will be fun! However, this still leaves an unusual combination, provided that at the moment the main characters are experiencing their difficult fate and gather to stand up to the army of demons, but at the same time, they definitely find time for love games.
And if you are familiar with the author Some+Leech. For the sake of interest, I sent him this scene in a personal message so that he could read and express his opinion, since he has an undeniable experience in writing such scenes. And he really liked it!
And this is one of his last stories.
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Харт - Показывает фак
Голем - Вот сейчас обидно было...
Учитывая Амиру... Это вполне возможно.