Our world is just one of many. The story of a man exploring a new world, into which he fell through the conceived idea of the royal sisters. And also the stories of other characters in this world, combined into one plot.
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I want to admit that this chapter was not easy for me. I had to remember various military tricks in order to match them to the complaint and describe it logically.
Yes, I am writing these chapters of Dream Heart Path, in more detail, since this is a memory of one character, and it is not possible to switch POV here. This means that there will be almost no missed scenes. They can be shortened, but not overlooked. Otherwise, it is not logical and does not make sense.
I just realized something. Either this pony is gonna have a lot of marefriends, or a lot of broken hearts. Same goes for human Heart Path.
Thank goodness for this, because I was confused.
Great chapter, man. Loved the details you put into this one. Though I worry for how emerald views herself as a being. Lets hope Heart Path can convince her that she is not an ugly being!
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Well, thank God you were finally able to comment on this chapter! Thank you buddy. Now I can continue working on Chapter 18.
Вот только вино хрен подожжешь. Даже 40 градусов горит не очень-то охотно, только начиная от 60 более-менее легко поджечь. Ну а что бы прямо взорвалось, нужен чистый спирт, он даже от трения шарахнуть может.
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Спасибо за комментарий!
Дело в том что именно про спирт я и хотел писать, но потом чето забыл и увлекся. А так я конечно в курсе.