Our world is just one of many. The story of a man exploring a new world, into which he fell through the conceived idea of the royal sisters. And also the stories of other characters in this world, combined into one plot.
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If I have to say I enjoyed the series and I would love to see it continue even more keep up the good work.
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Oh yeah, I'll continue!
I must say, all the cyclops and Imps really make this story stand out with its villians. Rather than using the Same old formula of the basic mlp bad guy, you touched on the mythical side of this world and added other such creatures to your story.
One thing that seems to bother me though is Chrysalis and Cadence. It seems almost as if they are getting closer a bit too fast, considering what they have been through before with the wedding. A small issue on my part, but that could also just be my way of seeing them right now.
Great chapter!
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Thanks for the comment, my friend!
In fact, I have already said that the wedding event that took place seems like paradise compared to what Cadence and Chrysalis had to go through on this island. Chrysalis realized for herself that there is something more in life than a stupid desire for power, and here, of course, influence from the outside affects (one of them is Heart Path). Cadence, in turn, has already forgiven Chrysalis, otherwise it cannot be... time heals. And I'm showing exactly one of the possible sides of an alternative reality. There is no point in holding grudges all your life, especially when your life can end at any moment. Therefore, it is better to forget about past grievances and stand under the same banner, fighting on the same side, against the world invader! Both Chrysalis and Cadence have lived about 700 years of their lives (according to my story), and they perfectly understand important values. Faith, Hope, Love! Besides, Chrysalis may probably be right in her thoughts. Two mares, so different in appearance, but they have a lot in common!
And when there comes a moment in their life when they have to fight... and fight on the same side, and sometimes life hangs by a thread from the mane, but they do not lose hope. And of course it's better to put aside all the old grievances. To forgive each other, and to love. This is what is the highest step (and this is what the Bible says). That's how I want to show these two characters, who have a lot in common. And of course, the Heart Path, which will play its role, many more times!
Tell you one thing I hope when this human makes it back. Trixie will tackled him to the ground and dragged him back to her room and use her newfound powers to claim him.
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No problem, and thanks for clarifying their current situation with each other. for some reason it wasn't clicking with me why they weren't clawing at each other's throats.
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You can be sure that Trixie is one of the first, rightly, to present her rights. After all, she is still one of the main characters who was the first to meet Heart Path.
Уважаемый Автор, а вы представлены на отечественных ресурсах или может есть русский вариант?
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Привет тебе, уважаемый читатель. Хотя я предлагаю упростить наше общение. Можешь обращаться ко мне, просто Макс. Мне 32 года, я начинающий писатель из Самарской обл.
На самом деле ты не первый, а уже как минимум третий пользователь на сайте, кто задает мне этот вопрос. Но каждый раз мне приходится развести руки с сожалением. Увы, но оригинала на русском у меня нет. Однако эта история (над которой я до сих пор работаю), хранится только на этом сайте. И я понимаю, что в начальных главах присутствует затрудненное чтение, однако смысл все еще сохранен прежний. Все главы будут отредактированы со временем, и в этом мне помогает мой друг из Москвы, который так же недавно стал начинающим автором. Его никнейм обозначен у меня в длинном описании (не стесняйтесь так же проверить его историю).
Я благодарю ваз за внимание и понимание к моей работе! В дальнейшем, вы можете не стеснятся и писать мне в личное сообщение или комментировать историю (что всегда приветствуется).
Кажется, до меня только сейчас дошло, что кентавры метающие фаерболы из хвоста позожи на Мотаро из Мортухи.