Our world is just one of many. The story of a man exploring a new world, into which he fell through the conceived idea of the royal sisters. And also the stories of other characters in this world, combined into one plot.
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I have forgotten and don't remember it when will Heart Path's promise will expire? When was he allowed to tell everything?
Also on another note, I'm still hoping Amira has access to some super speed transportation method to shorten the 3-4 day travel period the equestrians needed! I'm not asking for it. It's just my hope as a reader! :P So many unknown things appear out of nowhere in this whole story. Who knows ... anything can happen! xD
I personally am rooting for her to surprise everyone with ... something! Something eastern maybe?!?! :)
PS: Don't worry! I pretty much never mind waiting. :)
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Greetings to you! At the moment, Amir's POV is being written. A lot of things have already been written! But I haven't decided exactly what volume Amira will have yet! But I can promise that it will be interesting (including a naval battle).
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"H"? You mean Heartpath or something else?
Ouch...I felt that crunch deep in my soul
I see the issue here: Heart Path attempted to leave a bed that housed Chrysalis. No sane man would do such a thing!
He literally had to hold Cadence as she went through medical hell for several moments, not to mention the rising stress of the demons as well. Man's got a lot on his plate
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To amuse your curiosity, I will write to you in a personal message so as not to create spoilers in the comments.
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Thank you, friend, for your comment. You finally found the time to read this!
This is certainly not the chapter in which it feels like the main character can do so much in one day.
On this day, a lot happened to him! But his awakening began with Chrysalis (in the image of Luna), who was lying on him in the 69 position ... what happens then becomes clear, and is described from the POV of Chrysalis (The very two chapters in which I gave my best, because I literally had to move my soul into the body of this character. Which I showed in chapter 30. The author of the POV. I had to feel like I was the Chrysalis * in my story* all this time. And when I was writing her story, and looking at the keyboard... Sometimes, I saw her hooves, but not my hands. It seemed to me that I could go crazy like that... But NO! I was able to accept this role. It was a little revelation from the author.) In general, the descriptions of each POV, I try to do exactly so as to use my acting talent, a lot of details, and sensations.
This whole chapter was supposed to be exactly (Part 2), in which the main character will finally feel the magic of Cadence. Of course, I tried to put an interesting effect into this spell (which happened during the kiss, which I described in this chapter).
Heh... I've made a lot of revelations.
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This chapter was easily one of those chapters where the main character feels like they have no control of the situation, and have to go with whatever flow is currently happening.
But yes, many things were shown here, and many connections were made...as poor Cadence will soon learn
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Forgive me, but I don't quite understand what you're talking about when you comment on the Prologue.
And why should I stick to any one time? What prevents me from writing about the past tense, and then switching to the present tense?
Please clarify your comment.
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I'll do the editing later. Right now I can't miss the inspiration when writing the next chapter.
Уф... Это особо больно читать человеку, который проработал год в травмпункте.
Вывихи конечностей вправляются медленно и аккуратно, процесс может занимать до 15 минут и никаких ХРУСТОВ там быть не должно ни в коем случае, а популярные в кино и играх резкие дерганья конечности приведут только к большим травмам.