Our world is just one of many. The story of a man exploring a new world, into which he fell through the conceived idea of the royal sisters. And also the stories of other characters in this world, combined into one plot.
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Yay for hoof crossbows! I seriously expected them to become a very big thing for the army. Yet, ever since in the chapter where the "ring of absolute devotion" was introduced. We never heard about these crossbows again ... for 700 years it seems? I guess they mainly made for Amira, or we have not reached a big enough confrontation in Equestria to need them? Wait, what exactly did the pegasis have in the first chapters when they met Heart Path? I have forgotten by now. True I think Dark fog and Heart Path had already dealt with the timber wolves by then, yet still.
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These pegasi had the same hoofed crossbows, which also have the ability to shoot rubber "Bolts" (arrows are not used in crossbows, namely Bolts), as an analogue rubber bullets. There in chapter 3 it is written why this is so.
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No wonder I had forgotten. Back then I didn't know of the history of these crossbow equipments and how important they were for the story way further ahead! Thus I didn't remember all the details back then!
To be honest, I had to go and re-read chapter 24 to remember her role in all of this, though that isn't much of a complaint.
On the note of the princess, I feel for her. She has little money to her name, she has lost one stallion already and was told to forget about him, and now she goes to find Heart Path...who isn't in Canterlot to begin with...poor mare
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It really is, brother. Therefore, I am writing this story in such a way that the reader has a lot of respect and sympathy for this mare. But the plot will continue, and we can believe that Amira will still find Heart Path... although it won't be easy. And what Cadence experienced may seem like an "easy walk" on the seashore.
I take it you haven't read this chapter in full yet?
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I just finished it, and daaaaaaang I forget how good you are at writing scenes. That dance scene with Amira was top notch, and I felt I was not only part of the audience, but sitting merely inches from her as well.
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Heh! Yes, an evening walk and a cup of coffee played a role, and of course a music track.
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Ah! The finer, and usually smaller, things in life tend to motivate in the greatest ways.
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That's right. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave your comments! They always cheer me up.
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No problem, brother!
11120904 For some reason Fimfiction did not notify me that you responded. Apologies sir/ma'am. To explain, sorry for not being clear, in English grammar switching tenses is never done. It is also considered improper grammar and I'll admit I'm a bit of a stickler when it comes to grammar. I apologize if I insulted you by my comment. I tend to be bare-balls blunt. Again, sorry if I insulted you. It was not my intention. Let me get to your next comment, which I also did not receive any notification about.
Apparently I missed the part where English is not your first language. Derp on me. My comment was left on the assumption that you were a native speaker. I would have been more polite if I had realized you were not.
11121696 Okay, fair enough. When the inspiration hits you have to go with it.
And in regard to me not continuing to read your story, I have the right to stop reading something if I want to. Not everything is for everybody. If I happen to like one story and not another, that is my decision and I refuse to feel guilty for liking what I like and not liking what I don't like. I don't know how things work where you are from, but I have the freedom to chose and I chose not to continue. It is not an insult to you, so please don't take it that way. Nor is it a slight against you or your story in any way, shape, or form. You've already stated you dislike my own story. If you don't like it, then don't force yourself to read it. I won't be offended. And for the record, I did not downvote your story when I stopped reading.
I love this series can't wait for the next chapter. I can definitely see Sparks are going to set the world on fire when she finds out what happened to him she gets to the country of Equestria.
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Because Celestia, Luna, and Discord were bored and wanted a mortal they could play with and mess with.
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In the prologue, I showed only one side of these characters, but in fact, the plot has a deeper meaning. And the answers to many questions are written in later chapters. Yes, this story is written in such a way as to play with the reader, with his mental capabilities.
Many readers see a porn saga in my story. But I'm writing something more than that.
Many familiar characters are involved in this story, and everyone plays a role.
Yes! It will still take me some time to go back to the initial chapters and do the editing.
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I have no doubt that in America, Grandmother is also respected. Thank you for your comment, and to be honest, sometimes I think that there is not enough time in the earth's day. Of course, I will need to go back to these chapters and do the editing. But sometimes you have to choose exactly the option that gives inspiration. So I'm taking advantage of this moment and writing the next chapter.
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What are you talking about? I didn't write about ponies having firearms in this chapter. Here it was meant, it was the masters of making armor for ponies, and other weapons, which becomes an example of the original or those very samples of weapons that the Roman legionnaires had.
That is, I tried to show in this chapter why all the guards have weapons and armor similar to human counterparts.
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There is a fan fiction by a Russian author called Steel Wings. And this is a good example, but only in that story, the main character moves his soul into the body of a mare. This mare's name is Scrappy Rug.
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Believe me, I read something about the history of the appearance of black, smoky powder, so I introduced this technology in my last chapter. But so far, such technology does not imply the use of firearms for ponies, with the exception of artillery. However, I try to be logical when describing such details.
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Thanks for the comment. That's why I'm writing so that other users don't jump to conclusions. However, to describe a dance or a fight, these are my advantages in this story. To surprise the reader, this is my goal.
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Хех... ДА! И это было в начале июля. С возвращением Братан!
Злая она... Так матросов заводить, да еще в самом начале плавания.