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Please add a short update so the word count is 69,420 and title it that. That is all.
Hmmm, I really enjoyed it. Binged it in one night. Keep it up.
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Nice! Thanks for reading, also I’m not doing that lol but it really is close to being that exact number isn’t it?
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Lol, yeah after reading it, I wouldn’t suggest you do it. I’ll keep the previous comment for the memes.
Just binged the this story. Have to say, Luna is probably going on the warpath after she see's his dreams this night
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16. Is one of them correct?
19. I did not know they meant that corner. Although, I’m not surprised now thinking about it.
20-21. Are we gonna learn more?
Glad I can make you laugh.
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Who knows ;)
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Will it be revealed?
Enjoying the story so far. Looking forward to seeing what happens next
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Next chapters done just need to reread and go all edit mode on it so your wait won’t be long :)
How are twilight and spike new to celebrating nightmare night? They’ve done it before.
Then, how are they new?
Can someone sucker punch this hypocrite? Because, I’m so close to jumping into the story and killing him myself before his magic does.
Then carry a weapon or have someone around you at all times.
Don’t you mean you made her promise?
Damn, he’s surprisingly smart.
Figuratively or Literally?
And when will that be? On your deathbed?
Come to the real world, that’ll change real quick.
Honestly, I can’t even feel bad for him.
I don’t think he f*cked up. He just didn’t do it. So there may still be hope for him if he gets his sh*t together.
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1-2. She said sorta
7. She’s just joshing him
10-11. Cold blooded takes lol
Keep being you Pete :)
Hrm, is there evidence that you even can overdose on those insomnia pills? Twilight mentioned they're simply encapsulated spells so in theory it would just extend the effect. IRL pills work through chemistry while there's nothing to suggest equestrian spells are directly equivalent.
The Ponyville rumor mill better not disappoint.
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Nice catch! Joey thinks it would have the same effect as regular medicine in the moment given his rash decision making. What he doesn’t realize is what the medications actual affect would be. In later chapters I go over how magic works in this alternate universe more in depth however, I’ll sum it up short to answer the question. If he had taken them all, he would have an excessive amount of magic within him causing him to be even more dangerous than normal. His magic would need to escape and quickly however, he doesn’t know how to use magic so he’d suffer from magic overdose.
The Ponyville rumor mill is like 95% Rarity, such a gossip queen
Do you know what?
You are awesome, author, for real.
Magnificent work with emotion, I just really can feel Joe's emotions in this chapter.
About THAT SCENE.
I disagree with Joe about his feeling, but i really understand why things like they are. Personally I would have tracked her down, then kidnap and burn alive in Everfree. Or cut off her dearest father's head and left it on the doorstep with note "GOOD MORNING". But as i said earlier Joe is a school student, not a psycho Russian ex-military man
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Thank you for reading my story and thank you for your kind words. They really mean a lot. I’m touched that I could get such a response out of a reader
This was beautiful. Subtle, but awesome. I love how you wrote it in a sense where Joey is slightly flawed in his game, but still wins. Beats the cliche of "omg he just did it perfectly"😂😭
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I still made him a little too good lol. That shit bothers me too when I read a story so I try to avoid anything I’d personally dislike.
Just finished this chapter... That's enough reading for tonight. Maybe I'll get back to this tomorrow, or maybe I'll work on my own story... I don't think I could stomach writing a scene like that, which is why I somewhat skipped over it in my own story. Gore, yeah, whatever. Torture, bring it on! Death (and the emotional breakdowns), easy peasy! But rape... Makes me almost want to go back to those chapters in my own story to expand on them, but I'm not sure if I would be able to handle it without taking a hundred breaks and grinding my own writing to a halt.
I hate this feeling so much. It brings out the worst form of anger that I just... I don't have a method of handling it, like most people.
Anyway, I'm enjoying the story so far! Hope to finish reading this through over the course of the next week!
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When I wrote this chapter I had one purpose in mind. To create a feeling, a true understanding of how horrible and controlling an experience like this can be. I’ve seen it firsthand and watched it effect someone I knew very close almost every day. It’s irreversible damage and I don’t think people treat it with as much seriousness as it deserves. Still breaks my heart just thinking about how it affected them even after we split ways. You can only image how uncomfortable it was for me to write this but I feel like it serves an important purpose.
Oh, God! I prefer the world of official animation.This is just horrible.
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Wow that was heavy I give you credit for being able to write that and give it real emotional weight I sure couldn't
that scene was jarringly fast, took me a lot of time to process what happend. and i gotta say, i am going to kill that mare brutally.