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Great to see RD and Joey finally make it up to eachother!
Doesn’t he have a little herd going? With Luna and pinkie? Or is that another story I’m thinking of?
Anyways, if I am right and he does have a little herd I do hope to see his feelings towards dash change. I feel like they’d make an interesting dynamic duo that’d be fun to see, however it’s your story so if you decide not to go there, we’ll then your in charge. Good chapter, hope to see more, and glad they are friends again!
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Luna, Pinkie, Twilight trifecta and we leaving it at. Sorry lol however I do find writing Dash pretty fun.
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Wasted opportunity, smh
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Thank you, that was very kind
Holy crap add another one to the list, boys!
Honestly though, everything about this chapter felt natural and the drama never really felt rushed or out of place (And considering this episode of them all, that's a feat in itself.)
I'm not sure if Rainbows gonna actually join the herd, but I could see it going both ways.
Oh, and Twilights getting bolder with each chapter.
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Thank you thank you thank you! I completely agree about the pace and honestly the second half of this chapter I felt was at a level I’ve never touched before. I’m still not a great author but if I can replicate that with consistency I’d be more than happy. Also yes Twilight is becoming bolder much like the show. I want it to be clear she’s finding peace and comfort with her new life, truly taking charge. She’s becoming a leader and that takes growth. I’m glad you noticed :) makes me feel like I’m doing something right
11309150 hey no problem. Loving this story so far. Really speaks to me about how mental illness runs rampant throughout man kind. Also about how we can get so wrapped up in ourselves that we completely forget obligations around us. Like how he keeps forgetting to talk to Pinkie about Twilight.
aww i was wishing for another add to the herd. rd is sooo cute. but i guess tsunderes will always be the rejects