Nice story. I really like that Joey is able to get better and better over time.
Would also love to see if you let him find a way to get rid of the cursed magic. Maybe even replacing it with pure magic.
Looking forward to more.

Dragon

“Not it’s not” I say starting to sit up. “We can-“
“No it’s fine! I… I said I’d try and… honestly this seems like as good a time as any”
“Twilight your first time should be with someone you really think might be the one and I’m not saying I wouldn’t want to do this with you I’m… I just don’t want to take away something so important”
“Joey…” in a instant her worry seemed to melt away. Placing her hoof against my cheek she gave me a kiss. “I couldn’t think of a pony I’d rather do this with”
“But-“

Listening to this guy and sex, I just shake my head. This guy would never do well with women in the real world. He wouldn't be able to keep them. He is so clueless and everything he does that he thinks is right, would turn off most real women. The man is literally kryptonite.

Monk
"I was butt naked......and buff........and had white hair on my no-no region......." -Delta-Boio

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I’d agree for most women he’s a absolute klutz but, this dude is living in fantasy land where everyone is like ridiculously soft. It’s rubbed off on the broken guy