yay update

Whoo! Love this story! Looks like Joey may end up helping Luna more than her helping him.

“Why a new pawn to the chessboard” I’m taken aback by her response only for her to start laughing at my expense. “I only kid! Oh you should’ve seen your face”

You scare me Tia

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Wasn't there an actual gay couple on mlp show though?

Not that I know of, although there are strong suggestions that Scootaloos Relatives are as are Lyra/Bon Bon

I like the story over all. Decently well writen. I like the pacing, and the story is well edited. Only issue I have is the main character's constantly whining. I get it, Joe has issues. Hell, his issues are his magical power. It is over enfezise. I like the exploration of Pinkie having anxieties. Her normal character does seem like she is over compositing for something. It's nice to see that side of Pinkie and I'm glad she is the love interest. It's awesome that the author is exploring anxiety disorders and some of what it is like to deal with it on a day to day basis. It's just to much of the story. PS after finishing the last few chapters. I would like to say the author is already addressing what caused my content above. Thanks