Celestia has turned into evil, corrupted ruler. Twilight tries to find a way to change her back, even with elements if she has to. But what Twilight doesn't know is that Celestia has taken this to account. But after Twilight hears about rebels she sees an opportunity to get old Celestia back. Who knows what will happen?
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I shall read this later and provide feedback.
That was...
Freaking Amazing. More.
Deathstar - Before The Dawn
This needs editing badly. Its difficult to read because of all the errors. I'm not saying its bad, just that it needs fixing.
1196975
Fucking epic song, sir!
That alone wins ten moustaches!
1197216
Okay, I hopefully changed most of the grammatical errors. Thank you, for pointing that out. It's actually pretty weird that I had three pre-readers and they didn't see those errors.
1196975
That is an awesome song there! And it's from Finland!
Interesting. I am curious to see where you take this.