Okay, this was pretty captivating. Not super exciting for me, but you made it very damn clear that Aria was excited, and at the end of the day, it's conveying what the characters are experiencing that's important. If this is where your muse has led you, I approve.
10474428 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZBhF9PZqOcQ this is the voice I was hearing from Adagio. I'm 99.9% percent positive Adagio wasn't written with this character in mind but that is the voice i hear lol
So, Halestorm fan, eh? Glad to know there's another entity here with impeccable taste in music. After tonight's events, I think Aria's going to be listening to Do Not Disturb for a while.
10474602 The idea is for every chapter to be named after a Halestorm song, with the chapter containing either the song title or a line from the song somewhere in its contents.
This doesn't actually do a whole lot for the story, outside of giving it a fun little theme. I just happen to really like Halestorm.
Very good. Nice to see some more adult stories that aren’t straight smut or fetish-fuel (I’m not knocking it, I just don’t care for it). Looking forward to reading more
This. I love this.
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Ever been to a strip club? They do that for real.
Story's off to an interesting start. Will be following this one.
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I'll be sure to include more cleavage diving in future chapters
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"Interesting start" is about the best I could hope for at this point.
Okay, this was pretty captivating. Not super exciting for me, but you made it very damn clear that Aria was excited, and at the end of the day, it's conveying what the characters are experiencing that's important. If this is where your muse has led you, I approve.
She left her phone in the bathroom didn't she?
I hope you write more of this. Adagio/Aria is criminally underused for a Best Thing Ever.
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Nah, though that would be interesting if I was going that direction
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I will, eventually
This was a fun read, I'm really looking forward to more.
not gonna lie, I kept hearing Moxies voice come out of Adagio every time she said Sugar...and i am 110% in for that lol
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Who's Moxie?
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZBhF9PZqOcQ this is the voice I was hearing from Adagio. I'm 99.9% percent positive Adagio wasn't written with this character in mind but that is the voice i hear lol
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Mad Moxxi is always on my mind, and was very much so the inspiration behind Adagio's use of the pet name "sugar"
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I'll try not to keep you waiting too long
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well you can bump me up to 125% in now XD. seriously though this was really well written and I hope to see how this all plays out
So, Halestorm fan, eh? Glad to know there's another entity here with impeccable taste in music. After tonight's events, I think Aria's going to be listening to Do Not Disturb for a while.
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The idea is for every chapter to be named after a Halestorm song, with the chapter containing either the song title or a line from the song somewhere in its contents.
This doesn't actually do a whole lot for the story, outside of giving it a fun little theme. I just happen to really like Halestorm.
Throws soiled boxers in the bin. Well damn!!!
A story where the Dazzlings is not sisters, cool.
Very good. Nice to see some more adult stories that aren’t straight smut or fetish-fuel (I’m not knocking it, I just don’t care for it). Looking forward to reading more