10654666 Did you really just ask me if this M rated lesbian romance fic (that's already had a sex scene) will have a sex scene where "the woman does most or all of the work"?
10654685 Starlight Nova is not the smartest person on this platform, and they've done something like this before. But uh yeah, very stupid of them to ask.
Normally, Sunset's my favorite character. This one, however, is a straight up, certified bitch. You don't treat another person like that, especially someone you supposedly love. Poor Ari. Glad Dagi's being so good to her.
This story is a rare treat. Just on a technical level it's exceptionally well written, but the emotions in it are what really bring the world to the fore. The personalities of the Dazzlings in your story are so sharp and distinct that they just pop off the page.
Especially Aria.
Aria is so real that it hurts, and that's a hard thing to nail down. You pull it off with aplomb here though. Aria's personality is a powerful combination of stubborn and vulnerable, and you are never left in question as to what she wants. Her motivations are as clear as they are painful and I can honestly say I can't wait for more. That latest chapter was especially good, your characterization of Sunset is one I haven't seen executed well, but here I can honestly say that she was flawlessly despicable. I always say: if you want a good story, nail down a good villain. Heroes are a dime a dozen but a good villain is what makes or breaks.
This has been a lot of fun to read and I look forward to more, thanks for writing.
10683359 You earned it. I'll be honest, because I write so much now, I don't read much, and I comment even less, but your story just nabbed me practically from word go, so cheers.
actually i'm kinda hoping that Sunset shows up at Aria and Sonatas place in the morning, and gets into a fight with Adagio
Wow. Now I hate Sunset! Can't wait to see where things go from here!
Will this story have any sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?
10654666
Did you really just ask me if this M rated lesbian romance fic (that's already had a sex scene) will have a sex scene where "the woman does most or all of the work"?
Bruh what do you think you're reading?
10654685
Starlight Nova is not the smartest person on this platform, and they've done something like this before.
But uh yeah, very stupid of them to ask.
10654685
Don't bother with this guy. He always asks the most absurdly stupid questions on a majority of people's stories. >.<
Wow, this chapter is a powerful one.
That is some hardcore gaslighting, no wonder Aria is so fucked up...
Normally, Sunset's my favorite character. This one, however, is a straight up, certified bitch. You don't treat another person like that, especially someone you supposedly love. Poor Ari. Glad Dagi's being so good to her.
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same i love sunny normiley but this one i hate with every fiber of my existence
Damn. Powerfully-written, here. Ah, Sunset. You asshole. I hope Adagio can give you whatfor by the end of this fic.
There are not many girls/mares I would refuse to play mental chess with in the MLP pantheon, but this version of Adagio is definitely one of them.
And with that, Sonata needs some clean panties.
10655435
Yeah, we're talking serious alpha bitch here Voice.
This story is a rare treat. Just on a technical level it's exceptionally well written, but the emotions in it are what really bring the world to the fore. The personalities of the Dazzlings in your story are so sharp and distinct that they just pop off the page.
Especially Aria.
Aria is so real that it hurts, and that's a hard thing to nail down. You pull it off with aplomb here though. Aria's personality is a powerful combination of stubborn and vulnerable, and you are never left in question as to what she wants. Her motivations are as clear as they are painful and I can honestly say I can't wait for more. That latest chapter was especially good, your characterization of Sunset is one I haven't seen executed well, but here I can honestly say that she was flawlessly despicable. I always say: if you want a good story, nail down a good villain. Heroes are a dime a dozen but a good villain is what makes or breaks.
This has been a lot of fun to read and I look forward to more, thanks for writing.
10673811
I really needed to read this comment. Thanks
10683359
You earned it. I'll be honest, because I write so much now, I don't read much, and I comment even less, but your story just nabbed me practically from word go, so cheers.