Twilight finds an old journal written by her ancestor Fiona Alyssa Sparkle detailing events untold as of yet by the history books about a Foreign land she nevr heard of before.
Taking place before harmony (between hearths warming and the alicorn's final battle against discord)
As twilight reads this tale she discovers that a number of her friends might have had a lineage beginning in Marengarde and they all fought alongside each other in a conflict against the griffon empire
You’ll laugh you’ll cry you may even reflect a little on the similarity and differences between your favorite characters and their distant ancestors
(Rest assured pinkie-pie's ancestor will find multiple ways to break the fourth wall)
Chapters (2)
What level of "dark" are we talking here? Just general violence or very dark emoitons?
I like this concept. I'll follow, but can you get an editor and clean this up a bit? Other than that it's pretty cool
Vinland Saga much? lol
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I got my mom to proof reed but i supose your talking about someone who understands the source material
1148245 Nope. I mean someone who can actually edit. Your mother probably didn't put much heart into it.
If you'd like, I could edit this and the next chapter for you. I won't say I'll be your constant editor, but if the story gets better I might just do that. If you want, that is. As long as you keep the chapters relatively short I have no problem doing it.