(First ever fic on this website! Woo!)
Three years have went by ever since Twilight became an alicorn. It had also been three years since Rarity disappeared because of it. Many who knew her did there best to move on, yet her closest friends still try to find her.
One day, however, Rarity returns, although it could have been through better circumstances. But she has very clearly changed, both physically and mentally, and her old friends don't know how to deal with it.
Meanwhile, Rarity doesn't remember her old friends as well as she should, due to her having amnesia. And while Naga had granted her her memories back, she doesn't see them as her own anymore.
Now, due to dire circumstances, Rarity finds herself in the world of her memories, and along with her new friends, seeks closer, and aims to give one final goodbye.
This is an interesting start. Loving the start so far and hoping you luck with the story.
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Why thank you!
I've had something akin to this idea for a while now. Twas a matter of which of the main 6 to do it with, and Rarity lucked out by being chosen.
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The only thing that I could think being a maybe problem was how long Rarity was gone. I would have gone for something like 5 years. I don't know if the 3 years is something from one of the games or if it is just a number you pulled up. I just feel like a little more time without her friends and them without her could have been done.
need more