oh i love it give me more
here have some Princess
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Oh, I hope they're really going to treat him well. I get this strange feeling as if my pulse was suddenly rising, in an uncomfortable way. I like master and servant stuff, but I fear that they're going to force him into some 24/7 thing without his consent. Anyway, really good and sexy story. Molestia be with you.

1092384 lol 24/7, i hope not, and its called BDSM if you didnt know following this history, KEEP GOING PLEASE

I like It, Faved and Watched. But, If I were you I would change the name of the planet from Earth (Ours, obviously) To the fandoms planet, Equuis.

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I know about BDSM, but thank you for trying to make me just a little bit smarter :) The term "master and servant stuff" was really a bit vague,, but I was especially talking about d/s relationships, which are part of BDSM. You were of course right about that. There aren't many fetishes that make me feel uncomfortable, even if I don't like everything, but if I dislike a BDSM story it's usually about matters of consent, maltreatment, or the characters' personal reasons for their actions, all of these in relation with the characters and settings.

Also, there are things like 24/7 d/s relationships, though it's hard for me to imagine how they work.

Just to clarify that

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Considering that the non-unicorn, non-pegasi ponies are referred to as Earth ponies, I'm not sure how widespread the Equuis fannon planet name really is. I mostly see the planet referred to as Earth.

I side with Smart Cookie on this issue.

hmmm...... to track or not to track that is the question????

1092624 Well, that depends on how many people have access to that list.

I have to read later, i have to continue writing my crappy fic XD although some people think my crappy writing is good, ehh *clicks read later*

THIS LOOKS FUCKIN SA-WEET!!!!

Yes, there will be a bit of BDSM, but in general it will mostly be the "yes, please master" kind of stuff. There won't be any whipping or forced torture, or anything too extreme. I'm really not much into pain as a fetish. I just like the idea of the submissive/dominant roles. And even if Bluestreak is a bit uncomfortable at first, he'll learn to like it...

Is the planet really called Equuis on the show? I had no idea... Gonna leave it as Earth for now. There probably won't be many more references to the planet anyway.

Also, I had no idea Bluestreak was a Transformers name too. And I used to love that show when I was kid! Inadvertent shout-out to the old-school fans!

O.O usually i have a shitload of random to say but.... O.O

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Dude, I've seen that joke a thousand times and not even the first time I saw it did I think it was funny.

Besides I love the name! It's so... simple. Other planets are named after gods, or battles, or are given long and flowery names. Our planet is just called Earth. So simple, yet speaks for so much about it.

Earth's name may be simple, may be easy to make fun of, may be a lot of things. But to me, whenever I hear that simple name, I hear one word.

Home.

1091696 FUCK YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE INTERNET IS HIS!

1092504 SEEMS LIKE SOMEONE HASNT READ MY LITTLE SLAVE YET sorry caps ;)

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Oh, I have read some of it. I don't know what to think of it. Pretty extreme, and I just can't look at Fluttershy beign hurt

EDIT: By any means, it's not a bad story, and I've read much more brutal ones.

And we trip over THIS kind of story again.

"Let's read it! C'mon!"

I'm still worried about Twilight's mental state after the last story she and I read.

*Steel looks over at the bloodstains left on his desk, and grimaces.*

I don't think I'll ever be able to get those dents her horn left behind out...

"C'mon! You know you want to!"

Well...maybe...

"Do it."

Mmmm...

*Steel groans as he leans on his hand, Rainbow poking him in the side.*

"C'mooooon..."

How do you GET like this every time we trip over a clopfic?

"What? You enjoy these too. What's wrong with me enjoying it? You aren't even the same species!"

And I don't mind that since I'm not the one PARTICIPATING. It's different...

*Steel pouts as he looks off to the side.*

"Different, my flank! You're still jacking it!"

So do you!

"And I love it."

...Of course you do...

1091210 When I was reading the description I was kinda thinking the same thing...

Story about OC fucking the princess(es)? And it's getting good ratings?!

What is this sorcery?

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Just to be clear, I agree with Smart Cookie (Applejack) that the name of the planet where ponies live should be called Earth.

But yeah, this story looks good. Great job!

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Oh, my... have we met yet? Hello, my name is art inspired and I'd just like to say, this story is amazing. Into royalty I see! If I may be so bold as to ask, would you consider hiring a co-op writer/editor/proofreader? I noticed some... mistakes that may be altered, arranged better and possibly put into an exceptional flow of words and grammar preferences that are sure to impress the reader more furtively. Please, don't feel shy about inspecting some of my own works. I'm a huge fan of royal clopfics and I must say, this one; Unlike most caught my eye rather... forcefully! I'll also P.M. you as well so you wont miss this comment. I'm hoping for your reply.

sincerely: art inspired

just noticed: 4 pic comment streak fom first comment

Hawt.

i didn't think clop could get featured

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"So what are you gonna name it?" *Gestured to the planet*

"I think I'll call it....Bob."

I liked it. Poor Celestia didn't get to cum, though.

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>implying that watersports is gross

...hot.

A guard getting it on with the Princessess? It's such a simple idea yet barely anyone has had the thought of doing it for some odd reason.

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I have read many, many stories here on Fimfiction and not once have I seen one person ever refer to the planet as 'Equuis'. They wouldn't call them 'Earth Ponies' if they weren't representing the planet itself. Strong, resilient, and can be found everywhere.

Yay! Trying to justify slavery!

1095256 I'm not entirely sure you understand the concept being presented.

Poor Bluestreak is going to be having quite a rough night it seems.

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Earth was named after Gaea, a greek titan/mother earth. She was the earth. Then, when romans took over, it changed to Terra, which translates to earth.

1095650 Not the point. It's still Earth. Simple, easy to make fun of, and just something I easily equate to "Home".

1093426 Yeah... I may be a bad brony for this one, but I never bothered to get the names for their characters down with the exception of Pansy (Fluttershy) and Clover (Twilight).

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The perfect amount of wet folds and dripping sexes...

And that's not all he's anal about.

No words are needed.

Meh. You can have a thumb, I suppose... Not going to favourite, though.

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Not attempting to disrespect you, sir/madame. However, you just asked to be an editor/proof-reader and ended with "I'm hope for your reply."

That doesn't really help your validity and you should probably revise your comments when it comes to things like asking to co-op with a featured author...

"I would very much like to make love to your vagina pretty pink princess."

O_O For once I am truly at a loss for words... All i can truly say about this story is... more. Please, I really want to know what happens next. I anxiously await the next chapter.

"You'll be in good hands with my sister"

Should be hooves.

Also, it's spelled "Entourage".

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Got it. Thanks for pointing that out.