COverart by the talented Congolike!
Please visit http://www.mediafire.com/?9bg4bbdv420gg82 for the Two Sides poster made by TehJadeh!
Equestria has been at peace with its neighbors for hundreds of years, the world having no need for military strength other than show. But when an assassin tries to kill Princess Luna, a darker side of things begins to unveil itself...
At the same time, a young pony named Alern awakens in the Everfree forest, not knowing who he is, or where he came from. Could the large crystal in is forehead be a key to his mysterious past? Or is it something far more... sinister?
The world is changing, and the magic powers of the world are shifting... with Equestria survive these turbulent times? Or will they be destroyed... by the Nexus of the Void.
A fan novel by the author of Miner's Eternity, a Minecraft Fanfiction.
My first major fanfiction, please offer constructive criticism! Cover art done by Congolike (congolike.tumblr.com) {Coming Soon} and TehJadeh (tehjadeh.deviantart.com) (Too large to make my cover art, but here's the link: http://www.mediafire.com/?9bg4bbdv420gg82 )
Interesting. I shall be keeping my eye on this.
Releasing this week's chapter a bit early because I missed last week's!
No new chapter this week, but I do have a special treat: the Cover Art is complete, made by the talented Congolike!
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Sorry for no release last week, guys... I guess I just lost my motivation. I promise I'll release this week, though.
This story is getting interesting and I'll keep my eye on this one.
Got some (hopefully) constructive critisism for this story, my own opinion though:
- Try and avoid writing his name over and over and over again, especially in the very same paragraph. It gets very annyoing after a while
- I think you missed the " on a few places where conversation starts, which made it a bit confusing, but still readable
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Aha! My first constructive criticism! Thanks a lot!