Prologue: Canterlot Vs Dimmsdale (Part 1)-Edited By Firestorm808.
In his living room, a brown-haired ten-year-old wore a white VR helmet, while two fairies watched their godchild with concern.
"C'mon." Timmy Turner grit his teeth in determination
Wanda frowned in worry. "Sport, haven't you had enough?"
"Yeah," Cosmo added. "You've been playing for-." He glanced at his wristwatch, drawn with a green crayon. "Uh, a long time."
"I'm gonna get it this time!" Timmy obsessively glared at his opponent. "I can beat-,"
"GAME OVER! LOSER!" The screen blinked mockingly.
"Darn it," Timmy yelled. He threw his VR helmet away in frustration and slumped on the couch in annoyance. "I almost had it."
"Timmy, maybe it's time for you to take a break?" Wanda patted him on the shoulder. "This game isn't exactly going to help you in life. You shouldn't waste your time on-,"
"I wish I had another soda." Timmy stared at the screen with horribly bloodshot eyes, ignoring her words.
Upset, Cosmo crossed his arms. "Timmy..."
"Soda," Timmy repeated without even looking in their direction. "Chop, chop!"
The two fairies looked at each other, wordlessly agreeing on an idea with a smirk. Wanda grinned mischievously. "Okay, one soda coming right up." The couple raised their wands, and with a poof, a bottle of cola appeared above Timmy's head. It immediately turned on its side and poured on him.
Timmy wailed as the cold liquid washed him. "Wanda!" He turned to the pink-haired fairy in anger only to falter in the face of her glare. "Okay, sorry." Timmy sighed reluctantly. "Maybe, I'm too on edge from playing for so long."
Wanda's expression softened. "Don't worry, Timmy." Wanda poofed away the dripping soft drink.
Cosmo smiled reassuringly. "Besides, with Vicky on vacation, you have all the time you need to finish that game,"
Suddenly, the doorbell rang.
His mother called from the other room. "Timmy, can you get that?"
"Sure!" The buck-toothed boy walked to the front door and answered it.
A teenage girl stood outside his house. Red and yellow hair draped down her fair skin while wearing a biker's jacket, a blue-green dress, and jeans. The teen smiled at him with her blue eyes. "Are you-" The girl glanced at a card she was holding- "Timmy Turner?"
He raised a brow in confusion. "Yeah?"
The girl bent down to his level and extended her hand. "I'm Sunset Shimmer." The girl smiled warmly. "I'm your temporary babysitter."
The brown-haired boy stared blankly at Sunset for a moment.
"I hope we can become best-." The door quickly slammed in her face.
4 Days Ago
On the bus to Dimmsdale Elementary, Timmy sighed in exhaustion.
"What's wrong, Timmy?" asked Wanda. She and Cosmo had changed into candy bars in his left pocket.
"I already know that I flunked Crocker's test again." Timmy sulked in his seat
"Relax, Timmy. It's not the end of the world," assured Cosmo.
"Really?" Timmy's mood lifted.
Cosmo smiled. "Yeah. Even if you completely fail, the world will still be here."
Any positivity took a nosedive to melancholy.
Wanda growled and took a bite into Cosmo's chocolate center.
"Ow, ow!" Cosmo cried in pain as his wife tore at his sugary body.
Soon, the bus pulled up to the school, and Timmy stepped foot onto the sidewalk.
"Ignore Cosmo," consoled Wanda. "There are worse things to be afraid of."
Timmy rolled his eyes in annoyance. "Yeah, like what?" Too absorbed in his thoughts, the boy bumped into someone. Regaining his focus on his surroundings, Timmy paled as his blood went cold.
Francis grinned maliciously at his target. "Turner!"
"Hey, Francis," Timmy greeted nervously. "What's going-"
"I have you booked for 9:00 AM," the bully answered as he pulled out his phone's digital planner.
Timmy looked everywhere for some sort of escape. "Maybe you made a mistake?"
"Really?" Francis frowned, unimpressed. "How dumb do you think I am?"
Thinking quick, Timmy pointing his finger in a random direction. "Oh, look! A ferret!"
"Ferret? Where?" The grey-skinned bully cocked his head away.
Using this distraction, Timmy managed to slip away. He tried to run only to collapse to the ground in exhaustion, panting like he had run a marathon.
"Wow!" Cosmo exclaimed in astonishment. "You're really out of shape." A shadow cast itself over the boy. Francis lifted Timmy by his shirt in malice.
To his frustration, Timmy couldn't wish Francis away without drawing attention to himself.
Francis grinned once more. "C'mon Turner. We're going to play a game." The bully carried him through the school while the others watched either in fear or laughter.
"What game?" Timmy asked nervously.
"Fishing," answered the grey-skinned bully.
"Fishing?" Cosmo whispered in excitement. "What are we going to catch? Tuna? Catfish? Shamu?"
Wanda sighed, used to Cosmo's train of thought.
"What do you mean?" Timmy quickly made the connection seeing the bathroom up ahead. "No! Francis!" He squirmed to escape the bully's grip to no avail. "Please!" His desperation grew as a stall opened.
"I'll be the rod, and you'll be the bait," Francis smirked as he raised the child into the air.
"NO!" yelled Timmy before being engulfed in the water. After about ten seconds, he finally got a chance to breathe.
"Looks like I didn't catch anything." The older kid laughed. "Better keep trying." Without hesitation, Francis repeatedly dunked his head into the toilet.
Later
"Napoleon had assembled the largest army Europe had ever known when he tried to conquer Russia." Crocker gestured theatrically to his students while holding a history book. "Unfortunately, his raw power didn't matter when he couldn't account for Russian tactics and the environment. However, all of this would be irrelevant," Crocker threw away his book, "if Napoleon had... FAIRY GODPARENTS!"
Following that outburst, a soaking wet Timmy Turner burst through the classroom door.
Crocker checked the clock with a displeased expression. "Turner, you're late."
"Sorry," Timmy said with frustration, "I had bathroom trouble." Some of his classmates chuckled at the assumptions made.
"For a moment, I was afraid you wouldn't show up. I'm happy to give you your test grade," Mr. Crocker said with a smile.
Timmy seemed to brighten. "Really?"
"Yes!" Crocker cheered. "Your test is the 1000th 'F' I've given this year!" The pale-skinned teacher pulled down a banner, celebrating this supposed achievement.
Timmy slumped in disappointment. "Oh..."
"Now, such an honor deserves a special prize."
Timmy raised a brow in doubt. In hindsight, nothing good came from Crocker.
Crocker placed a hat on his head. It didn't take long for the boy to realize it was a dunce cap.
"You get to be the class dunce again!" Crocker maniacally laughed while Timmy walked miserably to his desk.
He tried to ignore the mockery from his classmates, thinking about other plans.
Lunch
Trixie Tang and Veronica sat at the popular kid's table, talking about a variety of upper-class topics. Trixie groaned miserably. "I can't believe my yacht captain broke his leg."
Veronica gasped hastily. "Really? That's terrible."
Trixie sighed. "I know. We can't go to the French Riviera until we get a replacement. Why does everything bad happen to me?"
"Don't worry, girlfriend," Veronica said with full empathy, putting her hands on Trixie's hands, "you can get through this! You're strong."
A high-pitched voice interrupted them. "Hey, Trixie." A familiar brown-haired boy approached the raven-haired popular girl. "How's it going?"
She sighed tiredly and with some annoyance. "I thought I heard something."
"Probably nothing important," Veronica said with her mean smile.
Timmy pulled out two tickets from his pocket. "I was wondering if you wanted to go to the Crimson Chin musical with me."
The idea piqued Trixie's interest. She planned on attending the event in disguise, but they sold out of tickets. Seeing the boy offering her interests again brought a smile to her face. "Timmy, that sounds-" Unfortunately, a glare from Veronica toward him changed that. "I-I mean - SECURITY!"
The large bouncer yanked Timmy by his shirt and brought him outside, tossing him in the dumpster.
Timmy wretched from the spoiled food from the past week. Thankfully, his friends followed him as he attempted to pull himself out.
"Don't worry, dude." Chester grabbed Timmy by one arm.
"We got ya'," AJ grabbed Timmy by the other.
Exiting the cafeteria, Chad and Tad approached Timmy and his friends with mean smiles. Chad smirked. "I see you're in a dumpster, Turner."
"I guess it makes sense that he lives there," finished Tad.
The duo let out a nasty laugh that was echoed by everyone in the schoolyard.
Not long after, the girls left the lunchroom for recess. Veronica chuckled at the aftermath, while Trixie's reaction was more forced, as she watched the boy with a mix of guilt and pity.
Ostracized once more, Timmy walked away utterly humiliated with Chester and AJ following behind him.
Later
Timmy sat miserably on the bus ride home. "What a day," he lamented.
As a pink pencil, Wanda tried to console him. "I'm sorry about today, Timmy."
"At least school is over," asserted Cosmo with a reassuring smile. "Now, you can go home and relax."
Timmy's eyes widened with joy. "You're right. I can spend the rest of the day wishing and playing video games, with nothing to get in my way." He marched to his front door with renewed confidence. As soon as he opened it, a familiar face sneered down at him.
His evil babysitter Vicky smiled sickeningly. "Hey, twerp,"
Timmy froze like a deer in the headlights. "Vicky?! What are you-."
Vicky picked up the boy by the collar of his shirt. "Lucky me. Your parents are having one of their business meetings, which means we get to have fun together."
Timmy went slack in her grip, knowing the inevitable. "Okay, what-,"
"I need to finish my volunteer hours. So, I signed up to help the Dimmsdale High School girl's basketball tournament, and you're going to help me."
Timmy stared at her with a defeated expression. "By help, you mean that I'm going to do all the work while you get all the credit."
"Isn't our capitalist system wonderful," Vicky gushed. She let him go and pointed to the stairs. "Get ready! We leave in ten minutes for the away game."
Timmy sighed in annoyance as he walked up the stairs. "Where are we going?"
Canterlot
In Canterlot High's gymnasium, the student body worked hard to prepare for tonight's game against Dimmsdale High.
Sunset Shimmer sat near the entrance, writing in her journal to Princess Twilight.
"Dear Twilight, things have been pretty quiet since the Battle of the Bands. Right now, Canterlot High is going to have a basketball game. Our magic only shows up when we play music. Aside from that, I haven't got much else to tell you. Wish us luck tonight. Your friend, Sunset Shimmer."
Finished, she got up and walked across the gym, happily waving at her fellow students, who also returned the gesture. Sunset smiled at the turn of events. The people that she mistreated gave her a chance to be a friend. Once upon a time, she desired the power to rule and control others, but it only amplified the void inside.
Meanwhile, Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle, and Apple Bloom worked together on a banner for Dimmsdale High.
Apple Bloom put a hand to her chin. "It should say Welcome Dimmsdale High. It's short, sweet, and to the point."
Sweetie Belle shook her head. "Nah, it should say Bienvenue A Canterlot."
Scootaloo blinked in confusion. "What is that supposed to mean? Did we suddenly become some fancy restaurant? No. It should say 'Get Ready to Lose, Dimmsdale!' " Their banter was interrupted by one of their mutual friends.
"Hey, guys!" Sunset approached the trio with a warm smile.
The three girls returned the gesture. "Hey, Sunset," Apple Bloom greeted.
"Do you need any help?" Sunset offered.
"No thanks," Apple Bloom replied politely.
Scootaloo waved her off. "Our sisters already offered to help."
"It was nice of you to offer anyways," Sweetie Belle finished.
The older sisters made their way over. Rainbow Dash walked up to Scootaloo and gave her a playful noogie. "Don't worry, Sunset."
Applejack followed up, hugging her little sister. "We'll take care of this,"
Rarity head patted Sweetie Belle. "Besides, too many cooks spoil the dish, Darling."
"I think the banner should be something awesome!" Rainbow argued, "to show them how we're gonna beat their butts."
"Ah think it should just be something simple," Applejack said with a stern expression, "since we don't even know who's gonna win."
"I believe it should be fabulous, darlings," Rarity argued.
The flame-haired girl's expression faltered. "I see. I'll let you guys get to it then." Sunset walked away from her friends and their sisters. She soon came across Fluttershy hanging up streamers. "Hey, do you need someone to keep the ladder steady?"
Before Fluttershy could reply, a pre-teen with a blond bun came up. "Never fear, sis." Zephyr Breeze spoke dramatically with a smug grin. "Your awesome brother is here to help." He quickly steadied the ladder with flair.
Fluttershy gave an embarrassed smile. "Don't worry, Sunset. Zephyr's helping me, even when he shouldn't have." The smile grew more strained. "Even when he really shouldn't have."
"Ah, okay." Sunset accepted her answer and walked away.
"Don't worry, Flutters. Your little brother will help you out no matter-," Zephyr paused as his colorful crush walked past him.
"Rainbow! How's it going?" He ran after the athlete, much to Fluttershy's dismay.
"Zephyr?! Get back here! I can't-" Fluttershy grabbed the streamers to regain her balance only for the ladder to tip over, leaving her dangling from the wall. "Zephyr Breeze!" Unfortunately, her exclamations didn't reach the others as fast as they should have.
Sunset walked over to Pinkie Pie, setting up the refreshment stand.
"Hey, Pinkie."
"Hey, Sunny."
"Need some help with the refreshments."
"I'm fine. My family is already helping me." She gestured to her three sisters bringing in the food. "Don't you guys love helping out?"
"Yes," answered Maud in a dull tone.
"Remember, Pinkie. No eating until the games start or else!" chastised Limestone.
"Mhmm," Marble shyly nodded.
Pinkie Pie gushed before going off to help Maud. "Isn't having a family awesome, Sunset?"
"Yeah..." Sunset watched all her friends' family members together. "It is," she continued in an even quieter voice. Feeling out of place, she left the gym with a forlorn and tired expression.
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I'm wait new chapter!
"The door was slammed in her face"
Appropriate reaction from Timmy considering his not great history with babysitters. Also seeing the FOP characters back to there pre muffin (it makes sense if you watched FOP) selves is really nice.
Before I read, I have two questions. Firstly, is this before Poof and, if so, is this before or after the FOP movie, Channel Chasers.
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Before Poof and after Channel Chasers. I will specify that in the description.
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Yush! Welcome to my Tracking list, then.
Sunset is gonna be miffed when she discovers Timmy's secret. To think that as a villain, she spent so much time and efforts trying to get Twilight's crown from another world...and turns out in this one there were kids with wish-granting fairies all along.
this...... will get interesting.
To be fair magic's the only thing that can explain Timmy's life.
As long as there's no Chloe or Sparky, I am in.
A EqG crossover story... with the Fairly OddParents?
How does Timmy use the magic in the game, the da rules say that it can’t be used for competitions
Honestly this was a super unexpected story.
The premise for the story is simple but actually works super well and is something I would not have thought of easily.
I can't help but wonder if Sunset Shimmer and her friends may be an exception to Timmy having to hide Cosmo and Wanda since they do have magic of their own.
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In the episode 'Odd Ball' he wishes 'To be super tall and talented at basket ball, ow, until I win enough money for a new V-Cube then I never wnt to be this freakishly huge again.'
And he is, except for the last few minutes.
When he asks about it, Cosmo and Wanda explain that it's only the lest few minutes in a basket ball game that really count as a competition, which is WHY he has to teach the team (in the episode) how to share and work as an actual team and win.
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My read on the "no telling " rule is that it seems to have a lot of asterisks.
In canon, here are the beings who've been able to see Timmy's fairies without consequence:
1. Other fairies.
2. Other godkids.
3. Other godparents.
4. Other supernatural beings.
5. Aliens.
6. Any being with experience with magic.
My guess is that not only could the Rainbooms be allowed to see Timmy's fairies, but all of Canterlot High. Having seen magic before, and been enthralled by it, they could be allowed to see Timmy's fairies.
However, for....reasons, they're not going to be figuring that out right away.
So no Chloe? Darn it. I like Chloe...
Hell,is about TIME, i waited for a decent odd parents/mlp/eqg fic since i found fimfiction back in 2013 :D, lets see where this will go.
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If I managed to make these characters feel like canon characters, that is the greatest praise I could receive.
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Her problem was this: she confined her activities to a single high school. Sunset, when consumed by her megalomania, wouldn't try and find a path to power through elementary school kids. She wouldn't never think a bunch of magicless kids could be the source of her power.
I'm trying to imagine all the residents of Canterlot having similar skin tones like those of Dimmsdale... it's giving me a headache. Also, I've never imagined finding this kind of crossover story, I thought of it, but never imagined it coming to fruition... this is both the weirdest and awesome idea to make for a story, you have caught my interest and an avid reader now.
Feels... kinda clunky. I get that a lot of the comedy in FOP comes from slapstick, but when writing it out it just seems... odd. Maybe I'm just used to thoroughly worded/descriptive stories, but while I would like to see where you can take this, the story just feels kind of lackluster because the usually slapstick nature of the show comes off as overly rushed and janky.
That and the barely there dialogue for the Rainbooms, also just so happening to be mostly slapstick with a bunch of "So and so did/said this" followed by "So and so did/said that".
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I agree, the idea sounded interesting in the description. But reading it kinda lost me.
This is probably the first of such crossover I have ever seen. I am super curious to see whose wish granting power is superior - Fairies or Discord?
Now, this could just be Pinkie being Pinkie, but I'm gonna assume one of those should have been Sunset.
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Will make the correction.
I really like this parallel to Rainbow Rocks, showing how far Sunset's relations have improved since then.
And that concludes your weekly exposition dump
Who is this and what has he done to the real zephyr breeze!!!
(usually zephyr is a jerk or something to Fluttershy)
There he is
It's a Minot thing but...
Now it reminds me at Rick and Morty.
Purge planet. The story told to Morty... Starting regularly and then going 'we a few days earlier'...
So. Does someone has to be purged?
Ok. This made me laugh. Poor Trixie
Ohhhh it's that OTHER Trixie...
Uhh. Cheap Knockoffs. Wrong color too.
*You're
Oof
Dat ending
Talk about obliviousness
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They forgot that she doesn't have any family?
This is actually some good writing of a story right here. I think i might actually enjoy this. I just have a few questions.
1.) How does that work exactly that Dimmsdale and Canterlot are both located in Northern California? The actual mirror world in the Canon is composed of Equestria, Not just Canterlot because there is also the question of where is the Crystal Prep located then? How about the Everfree? There is a Ponyville, though i think it is composed mostly of farmland used for rasing animals and growing crops. That raises a whole bunch of questions about the world of Mirror World Equestria, What about the Pie Family Rock farm? Where would that be located?
It would be really nice if you can get some more detail into the World Building of this fanfic. That would be awesome.
2.) Is this your headcannon that the Human CMC are elementary school age, while Zephyr is in middle school? In the Equestria Girls Universe, It is shown that the Human Cutie Mark Crusaders are first year high school while Zephyr Breeze is the same age as Fluttershy and the Mane 6 being in Junior High School at this point.
3.) You've said in the Author's Note that People in Canterlot still have their odd hair and eye colors, but have real life skin colors. But what would be their real life skin colors be? Its kinda hard to imagine that because this is not animation. Its writing, For me i think that it would do just fine if that Human Versions of the MLP Characters looked exactly the same in the EQG Universe and make it a human displaced fic or something in the prologue, Like for example an Asteroid hit the earth and the world began spinning so fast that the characters living in Dimmsdale were transported to the EQG Universe, There would be confusion at first but character development would seal that and make it seem that the looks of the EQG Characters would later on be normal for the FOP Characters for more in depth and fun interactions.
Thank you very much for this interesting fic and i hope i get some answers to my questions in your comments man
Oh and one more thing, As a follow up question man.
1.) Rainbow and Scootaloo are half-sisters. How does that work here? I mean Scootaloo has parents, Snap Shutter and Mane Allgood. You know that right?
Typically elementary history
Russian tactics? The only “tactic” they have is wave tactics. even winter was just an natural advantage of their home
Okay fine their were some decent Russian generals with good tactics that weren’t wave based, but the are forgotten for a reason, they simply could not successfully push Napoleon back with his tactics. It was purely the winter killing such a large percentage of his troops that made him unable to repel the Russians despite his better tactics
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Eh, just chalk it up to au. Not everything has to be canon, I personally prefer more canonically elements but as long as it’s a good story I’ll take it, but I’m pretty sure they do know
Man rereading my 2 comments here they sound... aggressive. Not really sure why. Oh well just know it was unintentional.:)
I just got reminded that his name is AJ
why is his name AJ
like it's not a question for you but for the universe, specifically
What did Zephyr do wrong by holding a ladder? I'm not sure why Fluttershy is cross with him.
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I think the answer's pretty self-evident dude.
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But that happens after Fluttershy's statement, and she's already talking in the past tense like some offense has already taken place. The wording also seems like the act of trying to help out made things worse, as opposed to walking away from it at a bad time.
This is the only clunky bit in the entire chapter. Twilight knows about their magic and how it works at this point, and Sunset knows that Twilight knows.
Other than that, this is off to a great start! I stopped watching FOP after the fairyversary muffin movie, but it’s always been a great show to me!
Hey
So if the CMC are elementary school aged here, does this imply Canterlot High is a K-12 school since they're in the same school as their older sisters?
How old do you view human Spike as? Is he more or less the same age as the human CMC?
He had thar coming for his behavior.
Talk about a bad first impression.
This is why I hate bullies.
Giving someone a prize over an F is ridiculous! You should only get a prize if you tried hard or didn't fail, which last I checked, Timmy hardly does.
Despite the fact I saw this coming, what she did was still wrong!
Talk about a sad/terrible excuse for volunteering if she's making Timmy do it.
Some things never change.
Poor Fluttershy.
Seems like Sunset feels left out now, even after all that's happened since the BOTB.
Aside from the other changes mentioned, this one I'm ok with as I do live in California myself.
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Plus people from other worlds are allowed to see Timmy's fairies too, seen with how Jimmy Neutron and his friends as well as Professor Calamitous saw Cosmo, Wanda, and Jorgen with no consequences. Granted Jimmy and his friends assume that they're advanced holograms rather than magic fairies.