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FabulousDivaRarity


I'm a Proud ABDL mommy. Writer of padded pony fics, a lot of fics about Shining Armor and his mom, several about Rainbow Dash and her family, and far more mom stories than you can imagine.

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Entering motherhood is a worrisome prospect for any mare. Twilight Velvet is no exception. Pregnant with her first child, she awakes one night to her baby kicking her, and contemplates motherhood. And, getting inspired, writes her baby a song.

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This was a very beautiful and wonderful story. I do hope you are planning a sequel to this truly delightful piece of work. :twilightsmile:

Pretty sweet little story

She rubbed her stomach now, talking to the little one inside of her who always seemed to be the most active when she tried to sleep. “Hi baby. I’m your Mommy. I can’t wait to meet you. You’re going to be so loved. I already love you so much, and I can’t wait for you to come. I can’t wait to kiss your head, and hold you in my arms. I can’t wait to wipe your tears away and give you hugs to make you feel better when you get hurt. I can’t wait to love you for the rest of my life, and so much longer.”

The baby, in response, seemed to give a little kick in reply. She chuckled gently. “I love you too.”

There is no love more powerful than that of a mother's love:rainbowkiss::heart:.

Too sweet for words, thank you for showing the beauty of the love and sacrifice that goes into motherhood.:twilightsmile:

I cried at the song! This is awesome!

Oh no! Tears...welling up again! So wonderful to read and a lovely scene for the expecting mom to have. I never get tired of reading about Shiny and Twiliy's parents; please continue.:twilightsheepish:

This was sweet, but I feel the need to nitpick a bit:

She was eight months pregnant with her first foal,

It was surreal to think that in just a month she would meet the little one she’d been carrying all this time.

I can understand ignorance, but the gestation (foal-bearing) time for horses is normally around 11 months, not nine. (Give or take a couple of weeks.)

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And with human pregnancies we always say nine months instead of the actual ten months, give or take a few weeks. While first time mothers don’t have as high a risk of premature delivery as mothers who have previously been pregnant, things happen. My mother was a first time mother with me and delivered three months prematurely because of family history. I thought of that family history and this is what I imagined it would be like for Velvet. Were she to have a history of preterm labor in her family, she would think the baby would come earlier.

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