Surprises For Shiny

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Shining Armor's birthday is today and he's turning four. He knows lots of things now that he didn't before.

He has no idea of the incredible surprise his parents have for him today.

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Bronycommander

Bronycommander #1 · Sep 17th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Beautiful! Nice Work!

ubestagula

ubestagula #2 · Sep 17th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Nice Work

Damaged

Damaged #3 · Sep 17th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Coverart sauce: https://www.deviantart.com/dm29/art/Little-Husband-Horse-456449196 (SFW)

Oh, and yes, I saw what you did there.

MixMassBasher

MixMassBasher #4 · Sep 17th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Awwww

brokenimage321

brokenimage321 #5 · Sep 17th, 2019 · 2 · ·

This is really friggin' adorable! I especially love the character voices! They were adorable, and fun to read

Jay Watson

Jay Watson #6 · Sep 17th, 2019 · 1 · ·

I got about four-fifths of the way through and then went to pieces as Shiny talked to her unborn sibling; oh God did I burn through so many Kleenex when reading this part! Absolutely adorable! F.D.R. once more you knocked it out of the ballpark with this short story. So heartwarming and endearing! you never disappoint or let your fans down! Loved the artwork for this story as well as the artwork of your other stories!

SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #7 · Sep 17th, 2019 · · ·

This was super cute! I love your stories about Shining when he was growing up.

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #8 · Sep 17th, 2019 · 7 · ·

Almost painfully adorable. You capture young Shining's voice fantastically, along with all the background bits that he's not tall enough to understand quite yet. (Also, nice touch with the airsickness.) Thank you for a story sweeter than birthday cake.

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