So, new chapter is out!! This chapter is up a full day later than I had planned, because I stupidly lost most of what I had wrote on Tuesday, so I essentially had to rewrite the whole damn chapter in two nights. I hope you enjoyed it. I added act numbers to each chapter and revised them a tiny bit. (Ex: Applebloom now Apple Bloom and in the first chapter the dogs say Pony instead of Poni) Please comment and give constructive criticism in each chapter. Like and favorite if you enjoyed! I will be very appreciative. Also, huge thanks to Drunk Ragdoll and Dark Rabbit Inganno, as always.

Edit: Also, the link to the song is definitely put in to be used by the reader. I also recommend you give ISMBOF props for making such a tune of awesomeness.

I cannot wait till the next chapter

1187666 Thankies! You liked Ego I take it? Also, is there anything interesting you would like to see happen in the fic?

1187785 It kinda should. Alucard is one of five major Vampires I based Marius off of, only CLEARLY Marius is quite a bit kinder and this story has alot more in it than stylized action.

Wait, applejackxrainbowdash shipping? Oh well. She went splat.

1187883 Maybe If I do decide to do a continuation into their relationship (friends or marefriends) I guarantee it will be a very enjoyable read. Besides, who's to say the girl can't swing both ways? Guess you'll have to read to find out.

Wait, so rainbow dash like girls and boys? I think there's a word for that, but I forget. Its still a little creepy, I mean girls liking girls and stuff.

1187917 I'm not saying that. I'm saying that she may be confused when she starts to develop feelings for another character, or she may not and end up being with AJ for the whole story. Point is, there are over 60 damn chapters left to write, and they will weave a really nice tapestry between each character's relationship with their friends and romantic interests. We'll just have to see what happens.

Dddaaaaammmmnnn, 60 more chapters?
I CANT WAIT!

1187958 Yep. Thank you very much I'm glad you're enjoying it.

1188036 He was just unnaturally tall ever since he was a child. Account it to genetics, from his now deceased family. Notice how in Explanations he talks of how he was still the largest child in the Orphanage, even if they were several years older than him? Thank you for your compliment and I am glad you're enjoying the story.

Awesome. It's good because it draws you in and makes you feel like you really ought to keep reading. I laughed pretty hard at lyre's responses. I imagined him acting like off of two best friends play as they sparred in front of the children. 'Ha! Take that fucker!'

1188081 Thanks!! Haha. AMERICA!

FOCKING EPIC

1. loved the age of steam segment , serious in the beginning ending with satisfaction

2.rd double sonic Rainboom? nice

3.FUUCK YEA CUDDLING!!!

loved the chap and wants MOAR

This was a different experience to say the least, did not expect half of what I got when I read this.

1188777 1. You are an amazing critic.

2.The support and ideas you've given me for this story are fucking amazing.

3. Thank you for all your lovely compliments! I hope you enjoy the next chap just as much Inganno.

1188803 Haha. Well, I thank you for the read. Is that a good thing or a bad thing?

1188813
It was a good experience, considering I have a soft spot for stories involving vampires. (DOES NOT MEAN I LIKE THE TWILIGHT SAGA)
Anyways...

1188843 Well then, I'm very glad you enjoyed it. I too have a soft spot for Vampires as I'm sure you can tell. I hope you continue to enjoy it as it grows, cuz it's gunna be BUCKING huge! (I also LOATH the Twilight saga. Lol)

Conflict, conflict, coooooonflict.

1188953 You my friend, have your head in the right place. I'm glad you liked this chapter.

1188808 indeed my friend now if you excuse me*gets on majestic steed* HIGH HO SILVAAH AWWAAAYYYY!!!!!

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I had no clue you were The Lone Ranger...

Most excellent, why I think it the greatest thing since sliced me!!

Loving the chapters so far...... not sure if Marius had other motives for wanting rainbow dash to do the sonic rainboom but we won't know till later. Looking forward to the next chapter

1187917
Being attracted to both sexes is called bisexual.

Also, hundreds of kilometres in the air?! The Kármán line, at 100 km (62 mi), also is often regarded as the boundary between atmosphere and outer space. Therefore, at least one of them should be dead..

1190733 Thank youz so much. bread.

1190888 Thanks Scratch Jr. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I guess we'll find out his ulterior motives later.

1191603 As always, thank you so much for supporting this story a ton, and I was more than happy to give you a shout out and use your suggestions. I'm so glad you enjoyed the content, and I will try to have a great weekend! Hnestly, I'd rather stay home and write though. Ah well. Looking forward to SF chapter 4!!

1191633 Thank you for pointing that out. I actually didn't see that it had spell checked meters and put kilometers. It did the same thing at first with handiwork and hoofwork. I fix eet I hope you enjoyed the chapter, nonetheless

Why do I have the feeling that he pushed rainbowdash to "almost suicide" just so he could watch AJ and Dash making out in the end?

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I am half expecting at some point an old nemesis that is a vampire that hates vampires to show up...

Finally got a chance to sit and read this, dam work REQUIRING ME to be here Hmph Now time to READ
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1196193 Ermahgerd!! No rape!! Glad you could read it finally and hope you enjoy!

1196338
Morality is such a hard thing to swallow, nice chapter i wait on baited ear for another

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Now its time to wait again

1196545 Thank you very much! Ya might have to wait a teeny bit longer for this one specifically because I'm on vacation. But, I promise it will be good.

Sorry I didn't read this earlier, I was ummm doing stuff.
Anyway, this chapter, like the ones before it, was really good. We got to see how humans were living because of vampires, which wasn't very good. We saw Marius completely destroy some trees. And what I didn't expect was the race. Honestly, when I saw how badly hurt Rainbow was, I thought that Marius was going to have to turn her into a vampire. Though I'm glad he didn't. Can't wait for more in the future.

I definitely like the way you write. Although I cringe at shipping almost all the time but seeing how you write this story I think, I might actually like the way you would pull it off.

1200324 Thank you EchoWolf!! You're an awesome reader, and I'm glad you enjoy the story so much man.

1200959 Thank you so much. There will be more shipping in this story, but I really hope it doesn't steer you away, cuz that would make me sad but yeah, thank you for your compliments!

Hahahahaha Marius is a perv i mean there is nothing wrong with it in a story but he watched them cuddle that is either stalkerish or just...... ahhh fuck it i cant blame him i would to
and just for the fun of it

1207344 Haha. He is a creature of the night. Stalking and staying in the shadows is something he is pretty good at.

so........ Marius is a pervert..... good to know, cause a creature this demonitc acting so nice all the time is turning my feelings into pus in my stomach. he's just sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo perfect, i cant wait to see him flip his shit!!!

great chapter regardless

1299033 As far as perversion goes, he's NOTHING compared to Lyre! Marius is just very protective, watching over them as a guardian should and making sure things go according to plan. Glad to hear you enjoyed it! I'm typing this in the middle of a lecture, btw.

APPLEDASH FTW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1377834 Hell yeah!

anyone else think that he watched the two all night..... I'm just saying.