I wanted to make this chapter a little more lighthearted that way I could elaborate somewhat on the situation between Marius and Rarity. Although some of this story is going to be lighthearted like so, there will be some points where it will be VERY graphic. I will include a warning (such as an authors note) before it becomes too incredibly bloody though. Like and fav if you enjoyed. I encourage criticism in the comments, so please, feel free to dissect each chapter!! Thanks!!

I like this. Marius reminds me of a cross between Alucard and the Vampire Lord/Marcus from Underworld: Evolution.

I commend you on your writing, but alas the wailing on humanity put me right off.
I hope things go well for you.
Onwards and upwards!

1083682 Thanks! That's exactly what I was going for with this chapter. There will indeed be many shocks in this story and I'm going to delve into Marius' backstory a little more each chapter. At some points, this will DEFINITELY live up to the Dark tag, but I'm going to keep it as similar to the show as possible.

1083403 Read the last thing that Marius thought before the end of the chapter.

1081501 It's all right. I thank you for your compliment! The feral nature and view of humanity Marius has will not be for everyone.

1081482 Thank you. There are quite a few influences on Marius' personality, but Alucard is one of the larger influences.

Dude reminds me a little bit of Alucard. The bashing of humanity turned me off a little bit, usually when I see that I just stop reading the fic because I just can't stand that stuff. But since this story involves a Vampire working for Rarity I'll keep reading.
And I can't wait to see how Celestia reacts to Marius, something tells me she's not going to be happy.

1084205 We shall see. and I know everybody's having a tough time dealing with the human bashing, but I can promise if you're patient, there will be lessons learned, for everyone including Marius. I can't elaborate more than that without giving anything away.

1084227 Can't wait to see what happens.

Honestly i could care less about the human bashing cuz to me it gives the ponies an idea of what he had to deal with and it only added to the experience of the story........hehehehe and celestia is gonna have abit of a problem with another mind reader.........another TROLLER

also his description gave me an image of the crusades for some odd reason

1084815 Oh, Indeed it will be a debacle. and you get the premise of this story very well my friend Be warned, you shall receive a shout out in the comments for the next chapter!!

1084841

"It says, "Life's nectar is the key. Nosferatu will reign the Darkness.".
this gave me cold chills

warning is duly noted

So far so good. I'm interested to see where you go with this story. But I do have one question: how did Marius get so tall? Is it a side effect of the magic that made him a vampire or was he just an absurdly tall human before he was turned? Cause 92 inches puts him at just under 8 feet tall (96 inches).

...Alright, before I continue. I need to ask.

Is this meant to be a smear campaign against humanity in general, or is it just a non-human's perspective on a race outside his understanding?

1520547 Read it and find out.

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Squirrel didn't lie this is interesting

1526624 why do so many fucking people like to bash on the human race like come on of course there bad people but theres a hell of alot more good out there for there to be good there must be bad