First off, I'm so sorry for the 9 day wait. That is way to long by the standards I have set for myself with the story, even with the three day vacation. So, to my readers who had to wait, I apologize. Now, as always, I wanna give thanks to you all and a HUGE thanks to Drunk Ragdoll (who's Sparity fic should have many more likes) and Dark Rabbit Inganno for their amazing and continued support of this story. Thank you all so much! I'd also like to give a shoutout to WaywardWanderer, who continued to text me every five minutes while I was writing, making it a bitch to write uninterrupted. Douche. But yeah, I keed I keed. I hope you enjoyed the new chap! Also, I'm going to give a bonus to those of you who read this comment all the way through! I plan on having a time lapse scene in the beginning of the next chapter, as I have done several times, but I can't decide whether to make it an epic large-scale fight between Marius, Lyre, and an army of humans OR one of Lyre's assignments of assassinating a human dignitary. Why don't you guys decide for me?!?! As always, constructive criticism welcome, like and favourite if you enjoyed, and I hope you enjoyed this chapter!

Yay me constently refeshing the page every 10 minutes paid off ^_^ time to read.

1238201 Haha. Like a BAWS!

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THIS HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH ANYTHING BUT ITS DAM FUNNY!
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1238222 Fucking LOL'd!

HAZZAH reference FOUND!

1238262 Good catch!

"When you are done reading this letter Celestia, please give it to your sister. You should be ashamed of yourself."

fell over in my chair laughing!

1238299 Thank you! I figured everypony would love that!

Murderous fillies... Get the anti-tank rifle!!!

1238384 Haha. Lock and load, bro!

Battle battle battle. If those three aren't voted up, then you can do the assassination.
Also, pony centaurs?

1238407 Thanks man! Your support is as awesome as always, and I'm sure WaywardWanderer will point out every typo in it soon, so I'll get it fixed. Shit did indeed just get real!!

1238421 Haha. Thanks for your input. Is that three votes in one comment for the battle?

Yup. *Evil,evil smile*

dat ending....*face hoof*

"From the expressions they made, Marius thought they were both about to have an orgasm, instead of just Lyra this time."....really bro really

i think i saw a exetremely small error .. i'll find eet latr

1238185to your request in the first comment i think you should do "assassin day with Lyre" considering you already did a marius and lyre army battle...but they weren't vamps but nonetheless you still did it

GARBLEGARBLERABBLESNAFUU

1238630 Don't even lie bro, you know that part made you laugh your ass off. Glad you liked it and we'll see which gets more votes.

1238669 yush yush i did .....
now to read halo crossover called "the noble guardians" awesome fic

1238729 Hehehe. Carry on friend

1238780 That was just what I needed to cheer me up!!

Chickenese!!!! I was so surprised when Sweetie Belle stabbed Marius in the eye. I thought she was going to rip his wing or something. Plus, Marius just saved Diamond Tiara's life. Maybe Silver Spoon, too.

1238844 Yes he did!! Thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!! Originally, I was going to have her use a knife she took from her sister's the kitchen and lay open his lower belly, buuuuuut, that'd be a little much for the children in the class to handle.

These fillies are getting quite bloodthirsty.

1239099 Indeed! They must be stopped and soon! Crossover fic idea: Fillies of the Corn?

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I vote for the battle. I'm a pretty straight forward kind of guy, the whole "stealth" thing just isn't my idea of a good time. With that in mind, this story needs moar severed limbs!

So the Crusaders decided that since the have an immortal vampire demi-god living in Rarity's house, the obvious conclusion is to try to earn their cutie marks in vampire hunting. There's no WAY that could end badly . Also, I find it slightly ironic that he's being hunted by the Crusaders as a vampire when he used to be one himself as a human.

1240133 Love that! Didn't even know they had a logo! One more vote for the large scale battle eh? FINALLY SOMEONE WHO PICKED UP ON THAT!! Oh the delicious Irony!

I vote an assassination, since Lyre got no time in the story and it seems he will come into play later.

Have I ever told you how much I love authors that have long chapters? If not well now you know. So random ponies are getting mauled, that can't be good and I love the use of Derpy and her mail system. Those guards need to be better trained. Than we have the CMC pulling a prank on the class and Marius make dinner for Lyra and Bon Bon. And lastly we have CMC vampire hunters. That's going end real well. I like this chapter but I can't help but feel this is more filler than anything else. It just didn't feel necessary. And I vote for the battle. God help those humans cause they're going get freaking slaughtered.

1245883 Thanks! I too love long chapters! I'm not gunna lie, some of it was filler, but the entire chapter was meant to convey Marius' value of innocence. So, while 20% of it was filler, 80% of it was actual in-depth writing. I'm sorry you felt that way, though. Thanks for your praise, nonetheless!

1246008 I kind of got Marius value of innocence back when he was playing with all the clots and fillies in chapter 3 I think. It was before he got blasted by Celestia. That's why I got the feeling this was filler. But I digress, can't for the battle.

Derpy is an Unstoppable mailmare

1248872 YES!!! SO MUCH WIN!

1251721 You are verrry welcome!! And he is! He made a bet to actually pay for dinner if I got it before then!!!!!! Bahahaha

1251783 DAMN RIGHT!!

This fic needs less of the tortured past and amazing moments of wisdom, and more 'all-powerful Lord of the Night being subjected to everyday life in Ponyville'.

Frankly, you should have just used Alucard and been done with it.

1257790 Well then, this story might get tedious for you, because there are going to be alot of those amazing moments of wisdom and tortured past, along with war, time pressing situations, and horrific scenes, but there will also be plenty of everyday life in Ponyville as well. It's going to be a 70 chapter epic, for Celestia's sake. No, I couldn't have just "used Alucard and been done with it" because Marius is an original character that I created from the basis of hatred for a human race that lost its humanity and somewhat similar character traits from Kain of Nosgoth, Alucard, and Gabriel Belmont. Frankly, I'm a little insulted that you would brush off the character that I crafted and suggest using someone entirely different for the story. I hope the story elements don't make you leave and you continue to read, but please don't just suggest I use an entirely different character, because they are MUCH different and it wouldn't even be the story I made anymore.

1258665

Oh. Oh dear.

I guess I was clinging to the hope you were being ironic.

Never mind.

1259650 No, I wasn't trying to be ironic, and it's a shame if I put you off of the story. In the description it says "This is a lengthy epic, telling a tale of anger, revenge, pain, love, and redemption." In writing this, I had the full intent of not making it like any other generic, monster comes to Ponyville, Ponyville treats monster with kindness, they all live happily ever after. I want Feral to be much more than that. But, again, I'm sorry if I put you off of the story with this fact, my friend. Goodbye, and I hope you do well and prosper in your endeavors.

awesome story
hmm...could you make him accidentally meet some vamponies who will become his servants?
Because why not
Anyway keep up the good work

1264058 Thank you very much my friend!! There WILL be Vamponies involved, but I can't tell ya how. Spoilers and such.

A little late to the party, but boy was that a good read or what? Loved the shout out to BaldDumboRat, I cast my vote to Lyre’s assassination mission.

"CUTIE MARK CRUSADER VAMPIRE HUNTERS, YAY!" HO GOD MY INTESTINESS, THEY HURT!! JAJAJAJAJA

1273371 Hahaha. I'm glad you enjoyed I hope you like the next chap just as much.

1283610 Alright. I really want to stress that he IS NOT HUMAN WHATSOEVER but if you feel that this doesn't sit well for you, it's all good bro. Thank you for reading anyway.

1284539 I LOVE HELSING AND HELLSING ULTIMATE!! But, you have to remember that Marius is much different from Alucard. More generous, kind, and overall MUCH more powerful. You shall see that the more the story progresses, though. Thank you for enjoying the story.

DAMNIT CMC'S YOU SCARED JONAH HILL!!
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Cutie Mark Crusaders used innocence!!
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It's not very effective....

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1378429 Bahahaha! I shall make a scoped grenade launching silenced pistol bi-pod attached katana handle crowbar one day!

Act I: Youth.

>Alot of ponies
>Alot of
>Alot

Wut.

"CUTIE MARK CRUSADER VAMPIRE HUNTERS, YAY!"

...I... dont think their in the right mind...

1378451

WTF, mate? :-)

The day i understand what you were just talking about will be a strange day indeed.