Ok, so first off, I apologize that this chapter took a metric fuckton of time to update. I am over my stomach flu and I have finished my mid-term exams, so now I can focus on writing once more! You know the deal, my friends. Fav and thumbs up if you haven't yet, and you shall receive a cookie. A delicious cookie! Comment on the chap ter and tell me what you think, point out any errors I may have missed on Word, etc. Hope you enjoyed it.

Annnnnnnd... I think you lost me.... Not entirely sure why exactly, maybe just not in a reading mood right now? But otherwise great chapter. I hope I can enjoy the next one more.

Why do we receive a cookie? You should for writing an amazing chapter

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WE CAN HAZ ALL TEH COOKIEZ!

1512288 You mean you didn't enjoy this one? Did you even read it all the way through?

1512318
Ehhhh... somewhat? I skimmed after getting to about the halfway point.

1512330 Are you fucking kidding me? You didn't even read the whole thing? Can you at least give a good reason for why you didn't like it?

1512340
Um... no? Sorry.......?

Funny how simple stuff like making an author mad at me can make me scared more than other more scary things...

1512356 Well, look at it from the author's point of view. You didn't even read the entire chapter, yet remain firm on your opinion of it because you didn't feel like reading. It would be totally different if you actually had a legitimate reason for not liking it,but basing it on your current mood? That is just plain rude my friend, escpecially after all the hard work I put into making it. Anyway, I hope you enjoy the next chapter. Sorry you didn't enjoy this one.

1512377
Oh, well I suppose you have a point... and as for a reason, lack of shine perhaps?

1512407 By lack of shine, I'm assuming you mean it's dull, yes? If you haven't yet, go back and read the ending. See if that changes your mind somewhat. If not, I guess I'm sorry to disappoint you.

Now that sir......was......touching funny and slightly creepy....in other words AMAZING.....now we wait.

"Oh yeah, sorry I didn't answer. I blanked," Forged Frost told the Vampire. "I do that a lot."fave line LOL

also....woona is best teabagger along with MC

Ok, reread the whole chapter, while in fact it was pretty good, it had a tad bit much romance in it for me, but alas I am but one reader who shall never appreciate romance for what it is. Also, I'm happy you're finally adding an enemy of equal or greater strength for our vampire friend. Sorry for the lame comment before, I need to start rethinking something before I post it.

1512523 It's alright. Not everypony's a fan of the beauty of romance, like Michael Bay fans. ZING! An enemy of equal or greater strength, or something that is very powerful but doesn't want the Vampire interfering? We shall see...It's alright. Just try and be more of an actual reader rather than being a skimmer, if you would. I think you will enjoy the next chapter much more.

1512512 Glad you enjoyed it! I figured you would like that.

1512687 As always, thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed Forsythia being introduced, and the rest of the chapter as well. No, I will not introduce Slenderony. Glad you enjoyed the chap, Phoenix.

*sips tea* well i do believe shit is going to go down soon
Silver: indeed
Also just a question. did you create this world yourself? or did you base it off of an exsisting book/game/movie/other?
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1513795 I created this world myself, from scratch. Alon' Dar, the five Ancient Gods, the Deep Realm, Marius and Lyre, Alawen, A'lokir, Sylvanis Mera, and everything else. The whole shebang.

1513817 well there is only one thing i can say about that.

NIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICEEEE
i award you a hug from luna!
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1513879 Huzzah! I would love a Luna Hug!

While I can agree that Maruis would make a very good princess, he simply cannot become the best one as long as i am aware of Luna's existance.
We need more Lyra. We need ALL the Lyra. I need the Lyra.
I would have eaten the bunny... but that's just me... Fluttershy should eat Angel at one point.
Normally don't like FlutterMac, this is a strange and rare exception.
Frosty the Snowforge is in love with the GaP Trixie, and is planning something "You will be the first one..... to try some of my delcious eggo waffles! part of this nutrtious breakfast!!!
Flashback was a flashback, and a tad bit confusing, not sure why it's there... but like the TV show "LOST" its all just part of the mystery.... I miss LOST
Who is Forsythia? I bet she's Mysterion!!!
That is all!

with lots of love, The FFB

1513948 That incoherent babble didn't make a bit of sense, but you liked the new chap, so thank you! Go continue to ramble somewhere else, Canadian man.

1514085 Thank you very much.

oh SNAP

1514109 Shit just got real.

I sorry that I wasn't able to leave a comment on the last chapter. And I have no excuse except for my generally laziness... and Resident Evil 6 (That game was as long as shit.) So from here on I promise, no fuck that, I Pinkie promise that I will always read your story on the day it updates. And if I don't, feel free to send Pinkie after me. So here I go. Cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye. But that's not enough, so here's a hilarious ass comic I found on DA. Hope you enjoy.

So with this chapter. We have some more shipping, which is always nice. We have have a new character, interesting. The girls learn that Marius is now an alicorn and I love their reactions, especially Rarity's. And the scene after that was really sweet. And we learn that something is fucking with Marius judging from the fact that it interfered with his magic and from him seeing his kid. Wonder who that is. And I read the last chapter and I just want to say, LYCANS!!! That was literally my reaction. I just like werewolves more than vampires. Marius clearly has a hate for them. Can't wait to see what happens next.

1514237 That looks exactly like the comment you left on chapter 10, Intruder. I told you, RE6 is a pretty good reason for laziness. I love the comic! Why does everyone assume it's a who that's screwing with his magic. Couldn't it be a what? After all, I put something, not someone...but I digress. I'm glad you liked the new chap. Like I said before, Marius doesn't hate Lycans, he just isn't too fond of the idea of them threatening Luna or Celestia's life, or them being in Equestria period.

1514267 Oh you actually read that. Since you didn't reply I thought that you didn't see it. Oops. And it looks like it because I short of copied and pasted it and just modified it for this chapter. Well the first part and the last part about the Lycans at least. Oh mix ups how you love to embarrass me.

1514294 I didn't reply?! Ohmygosh, I'm so sorry. I could have sworn I did reply. I apologize, bro.

1514319 Don't worry about it. Just continue this awesome story. And remember I made a Pinkie promise to read your story on the days it updates. And if I don't well, we all know what happens.

1514355 Exactly! Don't you dare break it!

When Marius thought that last line after giving the coin to Frost, all I could think of was the Powerthirst video . Power spawning VAMPIRES!

I'm intrigued by that hallucination Marius had.......is he simply having a break down? Or is this another side effect of whatever was messing with his magic when he tried to read Celestia's memories? And regardless of which it is, I don't see that as something that's going to just stay as it is, it's going to get worse. But how much worse? And how long will he have before he totally snaps and does something...regrettable...

1515047 We'll have to see, although I think the answer you are looking for will shock you quite a bit.

Does that make me craaaaaaaazaaayyyy! Does that make me craaaaazaayyyy! Does that make me craaaaaaaazaaayyyy!

Forge Frost, I guess you'll be the first at finding out what you're first at!

1515312 POOOOSSIBLYYYYYYYY!!! Gnarls Barkley ftw!

1515397 Indeed. Couldn't have spoken words more true, myself.

1519910 What joke do you mean?

Trixie has a brother?!

1521635 Indeed she does.

"His daughter's severed head exploded in a gore-ridden mess, decorating his face in maggots and chunks of brain matter."
Jesus tity dancing Christ >.>

1524535 Told ya. Did you enjoy the chapter?

1524560 I did ^_^ you enjoy mary?

1524569 Almost done editing, gunna post the comment soon.

1524576 kk, ima go load up a Anime called Fairytail.
You should put a squirrel in your story :p

i.imgur.com/edkaw.gif As do I, Thank you for yet another very fine chapter if i do say so myself.

1526144 Thank YOU for approving, and for getting me Batman as a reader!

1526153 Not a problem.
Brb, going to get spiderman.

Well if Squirrels gives you a good review i guess il give it a shot, i do like vampires

adding to read later