Wtf is wrong with you too, clearly jack doesn't want to be with you take. Stop trying to get him but you keep pushing it to the limit of jacks anger nice work you two
Someone needs to start explaining or at least shoot someone already. If the matter was truly important and not to get off with jack then it’s be different the out of character cringe hurts to read now. Someone do something to break this up soon plz
This is a good story but everything seams rushed like the romance, ease into it. And there needs to be some heavy re-write on some things. Also the grammar is a big thing about a book/story and if its bad its hard to get into, that needs to be fixed badly. The spelling on the most part it great, spotted I few mistakes here and there.
9924590i would have shot them for stocking me. They also might try rape in the future and if they do I would not kill them. But let say they will never have a kid again and will have to pee with a bag.
9924590 They only want him for his junk. They don't care about him or what he wants. They haven't tried to get to know him at all. Nope, just straight to baby making. And to a southern man of his era, that is about as bad and uncouth as it gets. In that time period if a human woman acted like that she would be either tossed in a brothel or just labeled a loose woman and no decent man would touch her.
10066421 Aye very true. If they actually tried to get to know him then maybe he’d be willing to try, let them speak, and actually care to get to know em, but they ain’t and are basically saying “Fuck a foal into me then fuck off.” It’s sad really...just get to know him for fuck sakes!
Omg Luna , celestia You need to stop doing this stuff
👌 ok
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indeed
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Let Jack decided what he want to be or not
yay new chapter
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it's like the episode with rarity and that journalist just damn
oh shit... you shot my hat off. well... got any drinks.
Wtf is wrong with you too, clearly jack doesn't want to be with you take. Stop trying to get him but you keep pushing it to the limit of jacks anger nice work you two
Someone needs to start explaining or at least shoot someone already. If the matter was truly important and not to get off with jack then it’s be different the out of character cringe hurts to read now. Someone do something to break this up soon plz
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Told you
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Huh i take it back my apologies
And now, a war has just brewed thanks to jack's stupidity.😠
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Well Luna and Celestia started it by refusing to understand that he doesn't work like they want
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Well in this case, he should. Otherwise they will take him by force, even if it means war on one alicorn male.
....seriously *face palmed* when will luna and celestia get the message i known abit of dense people but this takes the cake
Some ponies are coming on way to strong.
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hehe......cake
So does Jack's cutie mark mean that he has infinite ammo as a power/ability?
Shit's gonna hit the fan faster than a pig can run to a mud puddle
Jack: I want to talk to my lawyer
One thing I dislike about some of these stories is that the romance is rushed, with these type of M.Cs.
This is a good story but everything seams rushed like the romance, ease into it. And there needs to be some heavy re-write on some things. Also the grammar is a big thing about a book/story and if its bad its hard to get into, that needs to be fixed badly. The spelling on the most part it great, spotted I few mistakes here and there.
Ok now I about to kick his ass nobody pulls a gun on Tia and Luna. I get that they where being pushie but going to far.
9924590i would have shot them for stocking me. They also might try rape in the future and if they do I would not kill them. But let say they will never have a kid again and will have to pee with a bag.
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They only want him for his junk. They don't care about him or what he wants. They haven't tried to get to know him at all. Nope, just straight to baby making. And to a southern man of his era, that is about as bad and uncouth as it gets. In that time period if a human woman acted like that she would be either tossed in a brothel or just labeled a loose woman and no decent man would touch her.
10066421 Aye very true. If they actually tried to get to know him then maybe he’d be willing to try, let them speak, and actually care to get to know em, but they ain’t and are basically saying “Fuck a foal into me then fuck off.” It’s sad really...just get to know him for fuck sakes!
Luna, Celestia. What the fuck are you wearing?
Those two are way to thirsty