Celestia, what the fuck. I wrote off the granny smith thing since I figured it was a necessary evil however you don't want him to have foals if he can't have yours. Can someone explain to me what that even means, the closest real life meaning would be medieval times however if that was the case Celestia would've killed luna when she rebelled. Also any chance Discord shows up in this equestria, just want to see him involved in a Mexican stand off.
i really hope karma hits celestia and luna here other wise *holds the reapers blade that are emiting a aqua blue aura* i will go reaper of judgement on them
Another excuse to not kill them, really? He should have killed them when they were starting to send assassin's, he even knew that they have sent them by insignia on weapons and how they wanted to free captured assassin. You don't have to be a genius to see that
You're just making excuses just to prolong the problem that could have been fixed earlier
This is bordering on being a little dumb. Celestia and Luna has proven time and time again that they will not stop. But he walks away again with only a warning ?.
Plz give the readers a good reason why he lets them live (given his background, him not killing them is strange), and then find a solution to get them to stop.
9811502 Jack thinks what they are doing is pathetic and that they are rulers of a country it would cause chaos but if they push to far then they will get a bullet between the eyes consequences be damned.
9840833 They already pushed too far, but they are clearly let to live to prolong the problem because they are the only real enemy in this story. This could have been resolved much earlier when first assassins attacked, etc
OK, This story badly needs an editor. At least for the chapters that I have listened to so far. That being said, I love this story. The guys like me and I have no problems at all empathizing with him. Its so refreshing to read an HIE turned Alacorn story where the character tells the princesses "NO, I don't want to be royalty, go pound sand." (Because to be honest, that would be my response.) Every story like this one that I have read has the character going along with everything everyone tells them. It just bugs me. Once your royalty, your life over. Its a gilded cage. Your trapped in the machine and thats it.
This is a nice change of pace. Great story idea, and well done. Again, with an editor (That you can find in the Author / Writers group, this story would be perfect. It does have some rough edges.
The Monk “Puberty was a curse for those inflicted with it, and boundless amusement for others who survived the process.” -Scarheart
Both of you aren't the only ones that are also pissed by the author's tomfoolery of delaying this stupid plot problem that could have solved much earlier.
No offense, author. But I'm just saying facts here.
I looked at her then sighed as I looked at her. “I do, but I feel as if I can’t allow another alicorn to be born.” Her snarl faded as she looked me in the eye. “It’s too much of a risk."
I turned then opened the door but stopped as I heard the sound I know all too well. I turned my head, and I saw a thirty-eight-pointed at me.
Okay, enough is enough.
Can you finally explain to us as to how the heck does Celestia own a f**king gun of all things!? In fact, why do the assassins and guards have guns anyway!?
Isn't this freaking medieval times!? And I highly doubt that they stole one of Jack's guns and reverse-engineering it that quickly?
And why reverse-engineering highly dangerous weapons like guns in a "peaceful society"?
it back![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Ah, the classic "You're not even worth killing"-insult. Still, a piece of lead in a skull might just help stave off the crazy in them...![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
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True
Is this story back permanently or is this my imagination cause i feel like the author is gonna go sike and cancel it again.
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Ya, it's back for good in fact I'm already working on the next chapter.
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Yay
Omg is probably Going to payback for celestia and luna.
Also more please and where the hell took you so long ?
Celestia, what the fuck. I wrote off the granny smith thing since I figured it was a necessary evil however you don't want him to have foals if he can't have yours. Can someone explain to me what that even means, the closest real life meaning would be medieval times however if that was the case Celestia would've killed luna when she rebelled. Also any chance Discord shows up in this equestria, just want to see him involved in a Mexican stand off.
i really hope karma hits celestia and luna here other wise *holds the reapers blade that are emiting a aqua blue aura* i will go reaper of judgement on them
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Why not use more technology instead of magic *hands you Fallout Rippers*
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2 reasons which are:
1. Fight fire with fire
2. Cause the reaper of judgement sounds badass
Another excuse to not kill them, really?
He should have killed them when they were starting to send assassin's, he even knew that they have sent them by insignia on weapons and how they wanted to free captured assassin. You don't have to be a genius to see that
You're just making excuses just to prolong the problem that could have been fixed earlier
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But Rippers are literal chainsaws with the size of a kitchen knife
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I still go with my choice
This is bordering on being a little dumb. Celestia and Luna has proven time and time again that they will not stop. But he walks away again with only a warning ?.
Plz give the readers a good reason why he lets them live (given his background, him not killing them is strange), and then find a solution to get them to stop.
About damn time cowboy. Where have you been?😒
When's the next chapter coming out? I'm loving this story!
Your a madlad for deleting this story. Lmao. That’s funny as hell.
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Jack thinks what they are doing is pathetic and that they are rulers of a country it would cause chaos but if they push to far then they will get a bullet between the eyes consequences be damned.
9840833
They already pushed too far, but they are clearly let to live to prolong the problem because they are the only real enemy in this story.
This could have been resolved much earlier when first assassins attacked, etc
OK,
This story badly needs an editor. At least for the chapters that I have listened to so far. That being said, I love this story. The guys like me and I have no problems at all empathizing with him. Its so refreshing to read an HIE turned Alacorn story where the character tells the princesses "NO, I don't want to be royalty, go pound sand." (Because to be honest, that would be my response.) Every story like this one that I have read has the character going along with everything everyone tells them. It just bugs me. Once your royalty, your life over. Its a gilded cage. Your trapped in the machine and thats it.
This is a nice change of pace. Great story idea, and well done. Again, with an editor (That you can find in the Author / Writers group, this story would be perfect. It does have some rough edges.
The Monk
“Puberty was a curse for those inflicted with it, and boundless amusement for others who survived the process.” -Scarheart
i donut liek thsi yrots.
Petition to chance the cover picture to a ponified version of Cayde-6?
Please! You can't just stop there! It doesn't make sense!
Honestly, I'd murder Sunbitch for less
Why do so many people think cowboys are willing to allow stuff to happen to them
more?
9810503
Then why didn't you let him shoot that sun bitch?
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Both of you aren't the only ones that are also pissed by the author's tomfoolery of delaying this stupid plot problem that could have solved much earlier.
No offense, author. But I'm just saying facts here.
What's Jack supposed to mean by that?
Okay, enough is enough.
Can you finally explain to us as to how the heck does Celestia own a f**king gun of all things!? In fact, why do the assassins and guards have guns anyway!?
Isn't this freaking medieval times!? And I highly doubt that they stole one of Jack's guns and reverse-engineering it that quickly?
And why reverse-engineering highly dangerous weapons like guns in a "peaceful society"?