Welcome back. And from what I'm seeing the chapters have improved significantly better than the first few. Although I would still go back and edit them, but that's just me. Good job.
....uhhh what? Ok first of all I’m glad to see this but this chapter seemed and looked as if it was rushed now I enjoy this story even tho I’m going to have to reread it because I don’t even recall what the actual fuck is happening XD but don’t rush a chapter out to get it to us. Now I may be a little spoiled by serval it thee stories I’ve read since I last saw a chapter to this but again it felt rushed and I hope that is not the case and I’m just being spoiled from all the other stories. Anyways I hope to see this again and I do hope if it was rushed it doesn’t happen again and that it gets fixed at a later date for again only if it was rushed. Anyways keep up the good work!
Very good, I see that you've really seem to have gone through and fixed things yourself. Its a major improvement. Loved the chapter. As for the little punk, I would have castrated him, shit him in both of his hands, and cursed him so that whatever he inflicts, he receives double.
It's back!!
ITS ALIVE!
Thou I feel we already had this chapter
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Welcome back.
And from what I'm seeing the chapters have improved significantly better than the first few. Although I would still go back and edit them, but that's just me. Good job.
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....uhhh what? Ok first of all I’m glad to see this but this chapter seemed and looked as if it was rushed now I enjoy this story
even tho I’m going to have to reread it because I don’t even recall what the actual fuck is happening XDbut don’t rush a chapter out to get it to us. Now I may be a little spoiled by serval it thee stories I’ve read since I last saw a chapter to this but again it felt rushed and I hope that is not the case and I’m just being spoiled from all the other stories. Anyways I hope to see this again and I do hope if it was rushed it doesn’t happen again and that it gets fixed at a later date for again only if it was rushed. Anyways keep up the good work!Pretty good keep it up
Very good, I see that you've really seem to have gone through and fixed things yourself. Its a major improvement. Loved the chapter.
As for the little punk, I would have castrated him, shit him in both of his hands, and cursed him so that whatever he inflicts, he receives double.
Took you long enough.
I was about to give up on you, but you managed to keep me awhile longer.
Love what you did here hope for more down the road
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Well that didn't help anything. Because, she sadly died anyway. Because of some some horny, and Super Psychotic Anicorn "Princesses"!!!!![:flutterrage:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/flutterrage.png)
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Nazism
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Regrettably, it seems so.
Please update
Update?
Update?