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Like a Moth to a Jet Flame

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Cryosite

Cryosite #1 · Apr 24th, 2019 · · 1 · Ch. 2: Hello, Father ·

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ZearouPon3

ZearouPon3 #2 · Apr 25th, 2019 · · · Ch. 2: Hello, Father ·

If you have suggestions on how I can improve and revise the first two chapters( "Hello, Mother" and "Hello, Father"), feel free to leave your constructive criticism.

I wrote both these chapters like unplanned short stories, so I apologize if my writing was really lousy.

I think I need to do some research.

ZearouPon3

ZearouPon3 #3 · Apr 25th, 2019 · · · Chapter 1 ·

I unpublished the chapters that were titled "Hello, Mother" and "Hello, Father" for now. I'm currently trying to set up a proper beginning to this story. I apologize for the sudden and substantial change.

Munro