When young teen inventor Micro Chip is trying to create a realistic gaming experience, he gets a bit more than he bargained for when he developed an ability known as the Gamer. Now his life is a game and the world is lot stranger than he thought
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The ending bit feels rushed, felt should of been longer before revealing it. But on the other side. Will We find out what Dash meant by Twilight and Sunset thinking she and the others were evil?
More blood for the .... *ehem* I mean more women for the harem god. *egggh* I feel he's a little to forthcoming with his abilities ... without waiting to see what they wanted... to just give it all up ... damn .... he doesn't have a guarantee yet on anything. Let them ask first ... you practically outted your boy spike there. I mean we know why he's their ..its pretty obvious... even he knows why their there ... but he doesn't know their motives ... they could just tell him they know and to keep his nose clean or they'll be repercussions ... but knowing his abilities he's guaranteeing himself to be used ... theres no doubt observe isnt broken as fk. If you cant read them their abyss if there level so and so and over .... abyss. even the general titles names and background info is uber. The gamer only allied himself to his best friends group because he knew him for years... the ninja being an ally just sorta happened ...but hey busty ninja master with chocolate goddess lifemate whos kinky as fk you know its only a matter of time before off screen sexy times ensue... won't hear me complain. We know celestias pretty awesome but he shouldn't. He should assume she's daybreaker just until he has more info on her .... also firing a magic finger bolt at someone over twice your level was asking for her to beat the ever living snot outta you ....how he managed to get the shot off without someone noticing him pointing and not ripping his hand off while he cast the spell. But the moment he fired he should've been subdued. I fired because your being racist is 4 words to many to recieve retaliation from abyss veterans by the second word atleast 2 should've had him subdued in that room. Having a spell charged just means she should of unleashed it on him immediately after he fired. Guess we'll go with them being distracted by spikes transformation. Greeeat first half of chapter but as you can tell waa *meeeeh* towards the end.
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I see what you mean about it feeling rushed, but let’s face it, if Celestia and Luna know that there are two ability users in the freshman class, they would want to make sure that they won’t cause trouble. As such, they would take care of it as soon as they could. As for Micro being too forthcoming with his abilities, I get that as well but think about it like this. He is very logical. Gamers Mind makes that even more prominent. He knows that they are among ability users, and that more than likely, if they tried to hide, they would be viewed as suspicious, so he nipped it in the bud. Plus since Spike expressed the fact that she is a high level ability user in a previous chapter (Orientation your right before they split up) and did not panic, he could reasonably assume she is a good person and that those she trusts are trustworthy. Who knows? Maybe that attitude will get him in trouble later. As for the spike thing...just wait.
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Oook. but will we find out what Twilight and Sunset did to make the Rainbooms not like them?
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Next chapter...maybe....maybe I will make it a couple chapters after that. I have the idea together for why but I am debating the positioning. You guys will find out either before or right after (in story) “Saturday”
Of course Luna would be interested she is probability a gamer.
Great work!
Even though most was inspired or ripped of manwha comics but your application of everything just coming together is really good...
You also tend to focus on the sexy bits a little too much... Because a statement in observe for the girls stating their bust size? That kind of stuff is generally only seen in Eroge Games...
I am looking forward to how this story will develop (and how Micros lucky encounters with Fluttershy and his 'date' will develop)
Sincerly
J
Now to get in their good graces... And throwing threats is not a good way to do that!
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depends on the person and whether you can back them up. in pjotlt threats only get you in trouble with Clarisse if you can't back them up. if you can you get respect. you still get in trouble but not as much.
I understand that when you're caught in a lie you must devolve the truth, but with him every time that happens he devolves everything... literally everything... why?
Gamer Luna!
Baldy?
Why I always saw Luna as an enthusiastic gamer?
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... because she has mood swings, the cheerful attitude of "let's go bust shit up" and sudden bouts of anger - all characteristic of being one? :D
Luna at the end really said:
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Another awesome chapter but I have to question gamers mind and just to be clear I'm not questioning what he said I'm questioning what he did because in shooting that blast he just gave Luna an excuse to attack because he struck first 😂 still an awesome chapter though