When young teen inventor Micro Chip is trying to create a realistic gaming experience, he gets a bit more than he bargained for when he developed an ability known as the Gamer. Now his life is a game and the world is lot stranger than he thought
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I understand. As I said, I like the chapter, but I do agree with what I saw mentioned. I have just posted a new chapter 41 and hope that you guys enjoy it! If you prefer the other version of events, you can just sub them in for what happened. I wrote it so you could interpret most of what happened being either or.
This is no joking matter, I get that it was punishment for stealing rainbow dashes panties, but the punishment far out ways the crime.
for example not only would it hurt like hell but a hard enough kick to the balls WILL shut them down making it so a man cannot produce sperm anymore preventing him from being able to get a woman pregnant, and you played it off as a joke.
HIS BALLS ARE MUSH
SHAME ON YOU!!!
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Except you forget, he has gamers body. He feels the pain but it doesn’t affect his actual bodily functions. For example he could literally take a nuke to the face and so long as he has enough hp he would withstand it. He could have a plane crash into him and his nose wouldn’t even break
Just added a paragraph in the chapter explaining it.
And so begins Chara building her own secondary harem.
Still a great way to resolve that so your score has not changed. 10/10.
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Thank you! I appreciate it. As I said, either way works so if you want to read the story again just choose which one you like best
I'm glad to see a Gamer fic updated so frequently. I enjoy the concept, and I'd love to see a full fanfic made on it, but the vast majority of authors never get too far with theirs. Thank you.
Poor Micro. His LUK levels will not help him with the constant pick on’s
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Good on u author. Ya it's definitely a funny idea but i don't think it flowed well with the story at that point. You aren't making an anime with a tsundare.
Micro should just accept he's a pervert at this point and just own it. There's no way he's not one at this point
What's wrong with placing a big order and picking it up? Did they order individually and then have her pick up one by one? Most places don't care if you order a lot provided you give them time to fulfil it.
Anyways, it should totally be in the realm of possibility for Micro to obtain the garments without stealing them. Not as exciting, sure, but we're sure they would understand...
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it's part of his training assigned to him by Frida. this part is for twisted phoenix obviously. speaking of which, will anything he does with those 3D printed images appear in story or will that remain behind the scenes?
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Oh, right. Challenge. We forgot.
9632329
I have an idea
I do enjoy this story greatly.
Still...I felt this genital torture was a bit much here. Especially since Rainbow already did that. And in this chapter she did this in an even more extreme form. For the same crime I might add. Sure one could argue it was to keep it a secret, but in the end it is about the same crime all the same. So, having such a punishment in short succession seems a bit excessive. And honestly, I was really curious what Chara was offering. What interesting idea she would propose to Rainbow. So I was a bit disappointed it was something this simple.
Buuuuuut that is just my personal opinion. I am really hyped for the rest of the chapters I still have to read!
Edit: Just noticed the previous chapter is non-canon. Though I still stay with my assessment that it is excessive, seeing how she used her magic to make her kick destructive. And while he does have the body to take it, it doesn't mean that it should be okay for him to take it. But maybe I'm biased because I'm not a fan of such punishments. Dunno, I always found them just cringeworthy.
Actually, why would he need Modification to fix his balls? It's not like his Gamer's Body already turns any damage into numbers, is it? Like literally cornerstone of his "class" suddenly cease to do what it supposed to do. He has to feel the pain for a little while, but that's about it. He literally can't be injured
In fact, this is at least second time when possibility of injure pops up. First time in description of Zecora's quest. It makes no sense in his context. His attacker may slice and dice him with a katana and the only things Micro should suffer through are significantly lessened pain from being cut and drop in HP without any physical cuts through his body. How come his family jewels are any different?
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It's called the "rule of funny". It seems the Author is going with "if it makes the scene funny, anything goes", and that includes voiding his powers temporarily.