Ding-a-ling! The bell attached to the shop's door rang out a high note. “Hello, welcome to- Oh. Hi Fluttershy.”
“Hi.” Fluttershy's pink mane bobbed in rhythm with her hoofsteps as she trotted between the shelves, out of Jasmine's sight. The pegasus had her ears put back, her eyes on the floor, and her usual mellow smile was nowhere to be seen. Would she be in the mood to talk about whatever troubled her, or did she just want tea instead of a nosy pony digging into her business? Maybe the best course of action would be a simple 'How are you?' when she came to pay?
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Sweet. Short. Nothing to explicit about the world of their relationship and inner feelings, very effective "show don't tell". Wonderfully understated, subtle, with hints of the flavor of equestria and the outside world of exotic wonders and secret loneliness.
I like it. Perhaps I am being to romantic.