“What is this 'important issue' that requires my attention this early in the day?”
She made no effort to hide the annoyance in her voice, glaring at the other alicorns as they finally acknowledged her presence.
“Ah, Princess Luna, it's uh...”
Twilight looked up from the scroll, an ephemeral smile flashing on her face before giving way to a look of concern just before she glanced at Celestia for support.
“What Twilight is trying to say is that an unknown creature appeared in Canterlot while you were asleep, sister.”
This is a story about what happens after a lone human appears in Canterlot, seen through the eyes of Twilight and Luna. The three princesses seek to understand their extraterrestrial visitor, each in their own way. Celestia tasks Twilight to find out as much as she can while Luna seeks to sate her own curiosity. Can Twilight figure out the newcomer's motive? Can Luna find out why the alien reminds her of herself? Can any of them find out what language he speaks?
Look! I wrote a story! I hope you can enjoy it.
And yes, it is completed. Everything has been written. A new chapter will be published every week.
To those of you who read this story on another site as I wrote it: Please do not spoil it for those who haven't read it.
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Can i expect a new chapter in the coming days? Or after christmas? Im intrigued by your story and would love to see how it ends
Just post the whole thing, fam. Not everyone is into edging.
The idea behind one chapter a week was to give me time to write something and have something done by the time this is out. But I agree that it is slow going, especially since the chapters are short. I'll try to remember to visit this place daily from now on to punch the publish button.
I also marked the story as incomplete because that's what it is to everyone but me.
Me like. Want to see more.
Let me guess: This human is a Princess Luna from another dimension.
liking it thus far,keep up the good work
Well you have my interest good sir. Keep it up I would love to see more.
I am unsure of what to make of this chapter. The last bit with anon has been extremity lost on whats going on. I cant help but feel as if there is quite a bit of context missing in this chapter.
Celestia should also have a tag since she is in almost every scene. Otherwise, it's pretty good so far
That woman is expendable, a liability and suspiciously accepting of the situation.
Kill her.
NOW!!!
Hey Mirta, I'm one of those who read it while you were writing it. Great story! It's an easy add to my favourites. Thanks for creating and sharing.