All the stallions of the world have been lost to a horrible spell. Only one remains: a human turned pony who was accidentally exchanged for the rest. Can he survive a world of crazy, lustful mares, with his freedom intact? (A different take on RGRE)
She hasn't given a reason to distrust her yet, and has yet to express any interest beyond his recovery, so staying is probably the smart move. ... For now, at least.
Huh, so he was scared of the alien and weird situation and got the hell out of dodge. That's quite believable and human, makes a lot more sense than the "screw this species!" alternative.
Just stay still man, she most likely wants to cuddle. Probably as lonely as you are. But do talk to her, take the middle ground, she's still helping you a lot.
He's in poor health, and knows he's likely to die if he keeps attempting to survive in the forest. She has been extremely respectful so far, and has been protecting him from the others. He's not afraid of intimacy, he's afraid of being treated like belligerent property. He's been asleep in her home, and if she was going to betray him she would have done so already.
Nice, so the stallions were somehow all gathered up by Celestia, I wonder what happened to the? I wonder if it also means the colts? Looking forward to the next chapter then.
Seriously, what is this guy’s problem, and what is the problem with every male protagonist in an RGRE? Do they hate women, or are they such complete dicks they can’t recognize kindness? Either way, it’s off-putting and irritating.
If I was in this situation, where every mare wanted me, I have them form an orderly line so we could get started.
9372691 His issue is in wanting genuine care and not to be taken advantage of. Because of the situation with Applejack, he is wary to trust anyone. This story focuses on the issue of finding genuine care where many mares are faking it to get laid.
9372837 She gave him a blowjob! And from his reaction, it was a pretty incredible one. If that’s being taken advantage of, sign me up!
But seriously, I do know the difference between being genuinely cared for, and just being given attention because you have a dick. Even so, in his situation, I guess he can afford to be picky.
9372837 In that case you probably shouldn't have gone with flutter-shy as the second chapter. By that metric the story is already over. Unless you honestly expect me to suspend my disbelief that the literal element of kindness would drive this guy off to further the plot.
9373125 Unless the point of the story is to see if he can get over his past experience to trust that kind mares exists. Because we feel something many times does not then make it true in an absolute standard.
But this guy has kept enduring the same feeling over and over again, and with Fluttershy not entirely innocent herself, it's a matter of seeing how this moral plays out while twisting both sides of the spectrum.
With that being said, I'm glad you've read the story thus far.
“Now then! I have some tea I would like for you to drink.” Fluttershy took a step over to the table. Hovering over it, she picked up a white cup with her wing, then bringing it over to me. “It may be cold, but it's mixed with some important herbs. You need to drink it all, okay?”
You call her Fluttershy before she introduces herself. Of course we know who she is, but this was a startle to the reader.
“Hello, you’ve never met me in your life and despite that fact, and that you suddenly changed species, I would like to suck your dick and treat you like a child because you are a male who is useless in everything except for things I, a mare you have never met in your life, approves of”.
For some reason, when you talked about the stallions getting hit with electricity and being sucked into a sphere.It reminded me of the super smash ultimate moment.
9376570 For some reason, whenever someone drinks something takes makes them pass out, i always imagine they have a chance of spawning on top of Mount Chiliad, with a UFO tattoo on their back.
9372691 I believe you've forgotten what the whole idea of what RGRE is supposed to be. They're an inversion of the patriarchal view. Where as in show canon and in most stories on here, Equestria is a more egalitarian nation, these stories takes the whole post-war 1950's propaganda of Father knows best and Leave it to Beaver where the woman stays at home, cooks the food, cleans the house and raises the children, while the man goes out to work, goes to the bars and does man-things and completely flips the gender roles, then a male character(usually) from earth in our time where our society is becoming more egalitarian and dumps them in a world where they don't know the social norms, they don't know the lay of the land and sometimes don't speak the language and in turn the main male character experiences what first and second wave feminists went through in their struggles for equality.
Then, pulled the cup away, she stared at me. Her mouth full of tea, she still found a way to smile. After that, she tilted her head back, letting me watch her swallow, seeing the bulge travel down her throat and deposit into her stomach.
Contrary to popular belief consumption of food or beverage is not instant acting. She could have drugged both herself and him and set things in place for when the both of them were knocked out. It's why we have a 30 minute waiting period for waiting after consuming food and drinks.
10527162 That's not usually how RGRE is portrayed. Also, "going to bars" is not part of what a man did. And raising the children was not what the woman did. She'd nurture any babies, cook, clean, and that was basically all she did (though, in a rural environment she would likely assist with what chores she was physically capable of and within the limits of her stamina). The man provided everything for the family, protected the family, and raised the children into adults as the woman raised infants into children. This is also why single-father homes don't tend to have any problems from the children as adults whereas single-mother homes tend to produce criminals.
He stays
Oh shit now its getting good.
Oh dear
She hasn't given a reason to distrust her yet, and has yet to express any interest beyond his recovery, so staying is probably the smart move.
...
For now, at least.
Huh, so he was scared of the alien and weird situation and got the hell out of dodge. That's quite believable and human, makes a lot more sense than the "screw this species!" alternative.
Just stay still man, she most likely wants to cuddle. Probably as lonely as you are. But do talk to her, take the middle ground, she's still helping you a lot.
I am beginning to have thoughts maybe that the disappearance of the stallions was not a mistake.
I'd laugh if it was Barry the bear and he kisses him then fluttershy walks in and goes "oh my". Then he freaks out....LoL.
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Maybe you could make spinoffs or sequels focusing on those other aspects, if you really want to.
If this is a voting thing, then keep still.
He's in poor health, and knows he's likely to die if he keeps attempting to survive in the forest.
She has been extremely respectful so far, and has been protecting him from the others.
He's not afraid of intimacy, he's afraid of being treated like belligerent property.
He's been asleep in her home, and if she was going to betray him she would have done so already.
Also, I'm pretty sure she couldn't overpower him.
Nice, so the stallions were somehow all gathered up by Celestia, I wonder what happened to the? I wonder if it also means the colts? Looking forward to the next chapter then.
Moment of truth!
Seriously, what is this guy’s problem, and what is the problem with every male protagonist in an RGRE? Do they hate women, or are they such complete dicks they can’t recognize kindness? Either way, it’s off-putting and irritating.
If I was in this situation, where every mare wanted me, I have them form an orderly line so we could get started.
9372691
His issue is in wanting genuine care and not to be taken advantage of. Because of the situation with Applejack, he is wary to trust anyone. This story focuses on the issue of finding genuine care where many mares are faking it to get laid.
9372837
She gave him a blowjob! And from his reaction, it was a pretty incredible one. If that’s being taken advantage of, sign me up!
But seriously, I do know the difference between being genuinely cared for, and just being given attention because you have a dick. Even so, in his situation, I guess he can afford to be picky.
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Trust me, broski. If I could get my cock sucked by a thousand of hot, willing chicks... you'd see no fight outta me.
Yr. fellow perv, B
9372837
In that case you probably shouldn't have gone with flutter-shy as the second chapter. By that metric the story is already over. Unless you honestly expect me to suspend my disbelief that the literal element of kindness would drive this guy off to further the plot.
9373125
Unless the point of the story is to see if he can get over his past experience to trust that kind mares exists. Because we feel something many times does not then make it true in an absolute standard.
But this guy has kept enduring the same feeling over and over again, and with Fluttershy not entirely innocent herself, it's a matter of seeing how this moral plays out while twisting both sides of the spectrum.
With that being said, I'm glad you've read the story thus far.
Yr. writer, B
Harlan, I see what you did there
You call her Fluttershy before she introduces herself. Of course we know who she is, but this was a startle to the reader.
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Oops! Thanks for the save.
Yr. writer who needs to edit more, B.
9372691
Let me put it this way
“Hello, you’ve never met me in your life and despite that fact, and that you suddenly changed species, I would like to suck your dick and treat you like a child because you are a male who is useless in everything except for things I, a mare you have never met in your life, approves of”.
That’s the basic way of thinking of mares in RGRE
He's gonna flip! That last part got me all nervous, I love it!
For all I know, nothing is going to get him to trust a mare, and he'll just beat it regardless of what Flutters' intentions were.
Holy shit, I'm actually interested in where this is going. Please write more of this.
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I look forward to what you have in store
For some reason, when you talked about the stallions getting hit with electricity and being sucked into a sphere.It reminded me of the super smash ultimate moment.
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Typical mare taking advantage of a declasse stallion.
9376570
For some reason, whenever someone drinks something takes makes them pass out, i always imagine they have a chance of spawning on top of Mount Chiliad, with a UFO tattoo on their back.
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But... But ponies don't have fingers..
🖕
9372691
If i were you i would get my Stromberg and blow her the fuck up. That means two things.
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In store, we have a bunch of futa mares.
This meakes no sense but whatever.
Everyone knows Bush started 9/11.
9372691
I believe you've forgotten what the whole idea of what RGRE is supposed to be. They're an inversion of the patriarchal view. Where as in show canon and in most stories on here, Equestria is a more egalitarian nation, these stories takes the whole post-war 1950's propaganda of Father knows best and Leave it to Beaver where the woman stays at home, cooks the food, cleans the house and raises the children, while the man goes out to work, goes to the bars and does man-things and completely flips the gender roles, then a male character(usually) from earth in our time where our society is becoming more egalitarian and dumps them in a world where they don't know the social norms, they don't know the lay of the land and sometimes don't speak the language and in turn the main male character experiences what first and second wave feminists went through in their struggles for equality.
Contrary to popular belief consumption of food or beverage is not instant acting. She could have drugged both herself and him and set things in place for when the both of them were knocked out. It's why we have a 30 minute waiting period for waiting after consuming food and drinks.
10527162
That's not usually how RGRE is portrayed. Also, "going to bars" is not part of what a man did. And raising the children was not what the woman did. She'd nurture any babies, cook, clean, and that was basically all she did (though, in a rural environment she would likely assist with what chores she was physically capable of and within the limits of her stamina). The man provided everything for the family, protected the family, and raised the children into adults as the woman raised infants into children. This is also why single-father homes don't tend to have any problems from the children as adults whereas single-mother homes tend to produce criminals.