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SaphireHoyt


Just a human who wants more independent stories :3

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A girl goes through death, and joins the S.R.G, a program that promises soul a second chance at life, as a spiritual guide/guardian. If she succeeds, she'll get to come back as either a member of her original species, or a member of the NEW species. Will she be able to handle her assignment? And can she really handle the responsibility of protecting someone so important? And from such a young age to adult hood?

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 40 )

Well... that's depressing

9185534
Don't fret, the stories not over!

9191520
*looks at incomplete tag* *looks back at comment*
Yeah, I figured as much

9191663
I was hoping to uplift your spirits.

9197524
It's been a few days, I've had plenty of time to have my spirits uplifted

9197600
Sorry I didn't read the time stamp on the notification. I just click as soon as I can.

9225897
Ahh don't feel bad. It's a new start!

This was adorable

9247163
I'm glad you enjoy reading the story! I'm doing my best to work out some ideas for the story right now, and where it's going, so definitely stay tuned!

This is both adorable and confusing at the same time

9260667
Well, it's supposed to be kind of confusing. It's about a girl who has to forget her memories, and has generally no idea what's happening.

9262606
Yeah but I meant that the random monsters was confusing. I mean we see it, it's clearly a threat, but it's only there for one paragraph before we move on to celestia's birthday

9262706
It's meant to only be a passing thing. it's like that on purpose, because everything seems to move so quickly in the spirit realm. I'm trying to stay as "in character" for her as possible, because her life right now is like a dream. As Celectia gets older, so will the attention to detail. This is what I'm excited for, but for now, if Celectia is to young to really notice the details of something, the less descriptive something can be. It's an interesting style of writing, but it does get hard. I apologize if you don't like it, I plan on having Celestia grow quickly so that she can have more intense battles.

9262797
Ahh ok, also it's not that I don't like it I just didn't understand what was going on

9264202
Alright. Sorry, I was assuming!

9301518
Oh my lord, I completely missed this comment! I'm sorry! I am VERY glad I gave you diabetes ;D

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And I look forward to more

9376229
There's a chapter in the works right now, and should be uploaded by midnight!

9376240
Good! I think you'll enjoy it too!

Im... honestly not sure what emotion to feel after reading this chapter. Doesn't help that I read this after reading through a particularly sad story on this site.

9376374
I honestly just thought it would be good to have Cassidy get some physical contact!

9376632
It is, I'm just a little confused on what happened at the beginning there

9376939
Well it just springs into a fight scene without really explaining what is happening

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Ah! Yeah I can see how that's a bit jarring.

Why do you spell her name as 'Celectia' I always thought it was 'Celestia'?

9379429
Celectial is spelled with a c, so i went with Celectia. It doesn't really matter how the names spelled i don't think.

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