A human, tumbling from his own harsh world, falls into the colourful land of Equestria but soon comes to learn that you better dont expect neither good or bad before turning the first page.
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I never judge a book by its cover, only by its title!
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And what judgement did you come to when reading this books title?
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That would be lovely in fact hehe.
while I am enjoying this story its also doing a good job at pissing me off! I hoping that this story continues and some sort of justice prevails!
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One ‘soon’ to many.
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Lowercase i should be uppercase.
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"Don't worry big guy, it still hurts a bit but it will get better. Besides, soon I soon will have three nurses looking after me.
The first soon needs to be deleted and then the moved to be after the next soon