A human, tumbling from his own harsh world, falls into the colourful land of Equestria but soon comes to learn that you better dont expect neither good or bad before turning the first page.
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No. Don't hurry. That's the trap.
I know some of us want the next chapter, wanting to know what has happened. But rushing through the content is the fastest way to make it less than what it can be. Take the time to flush out all the details you want, proofread, and then submit.
Or do what you want since this is your first story, and all writers just get better as they write and collect advice. Either way works.
Celestia is an even bigger bitch than I realized... I hope it's some dark magic or something that's got her in this way!
"Celestia, has anyone ever told you you're a bitch? Enemies everywhere is your fault, you would let a corrupt guard responsible for beating his family and raping his wife, possibly his daughter, attempted kidnapping, and attempted murder go free and punish the hero? By all means explain that logic to me, add more fuel to your funeral fire."
If Alex was me and I'm only acting with eyes everywhere, I would've started a war while my allies bring some of them to safe secret location (those being non-xenophobeck ponies and other races that are there).