A human, tumbling from his own harsh world, falls into the colourful land of Equestria but soon comes to learn that you better dont expect neither good or bad before turning the first page.
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please have one of the princesses give him permission to kill the guy
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Well considering Twilight told Alex to be kind of a inside agent....chances are good.
"I've thought of a wonderful present for you. Shall I give you despair?" he says while holding a sharp object to his balls after he has his eye slashed out and horn broken off
death is coming for you, you corrupt bastard, except hes not bringing a Scythe hes bringing a glock 19!
Unnecessary comma.
‘‘making it feel to him like’’
+don't
+information
Twice, here.
Twice, here.
Twice, here.
+kind's
+Missing space.
Twice, here.
Twice, here.
+Missing space.
+Missing space.
+Missing space.
Twice, here.
Triple.
Twice, here.
Triple
+3 periods is enough for a suspension point. Why are there 5 alongside a comma?
Twice, here.
+Missing space.
Lowercase i should be uppercase.
Unnecessary space.
sent
won't
get?
didn't
lets
2nd comma seems like it is better off as a question mark.
Triple
Missing space.
assortment
until
Mom?
If ‘mane’ is still part of his name, should the M not be uppercase?
Now for a regular comment:
Thought they divorced? Cannot be cheating in that case, right?