A human, tumbling from his own harsh world, falls into the colourful land of Equestria but soon comes to learn that you better dont expect neither good or bad before turning the first page.
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Hah, seems like Rarity found something in Alex she doesn't find disgusting at all XD
But wow, with every chapter the ugliness of equestrian society grows.
I'm actually interested in seeing a berry punch ship
cuddled
Missing space.
information
health
One ‘while’ too many.
nonetheless
+Period should be a comma with this one.
Twice, here.
+Missing space
+its
+double exclamation mark?
Twice, here.
Three times.
+Missing space.
Twice, here.
Twice, here.
Four times.
Twice with an Unnecessary accute accent on the uppercase i at the beginning.
+Missing space.
+Why the sudden new paragraph?
Lowercase i should be uppercase.
town's
too
open?
of
Missing comma after ‘entered’.
its
there
Remove ‘like’?
One ‘on’ too many.
were
Replace comma with a question mark.
Missing comma after ‘case’.
an
Seems like the comma is better off as a colon.
Belle's
which
Missing space.
an
Double exclamation mark?
an