A human, tumbling from his own harsh world, falls into the colourful land of Equestria but soon comes to learn that you better dont expect neither good or bad before turning the first page.
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Sorry i am replying so late, just woke up, time differences and all that funny stuff but in any case thank you for your tips, believe it or not i really did not know how one writes those words....me is ashamed.
Still i am happy you enjoy my story and well i will keep at it, and will try to throw in a few twists in here or there.
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Interesting is one way to put it. Makes me wonder how the Elements of Harmony even work then.
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That indeed is a good point, however i thought that the elements would still be working if the main 6 were loosely representing what they stand for. I mean for that is as long as they stay true to those principles towards other ponies that should be alright, since they rarely see other races except for spike. I know it is not the best explanation but i will try to explain it in story as well a bit more in depth, though it may take a while to get there.
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Keep up the good work I believe that in time you can create a pretty strong novel
All of it is bold for me.
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Lowercase i should be uppercase.
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Missing space.
which
Second comma should be a period?