A human, tumbling from his own harsh world, falls into the colourful land of Equestria but soon comes to learn that you better dont expect neither good or bad before turning the first page.
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i wont be surprised if silver is a rapist
9108215
Don't worry, justice will be served but there will be more bad things happening and maybe the occasional plot twist.
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security will be tight though!
What is even this story?
Missing space.
Missing comma behind ‘however’.
Twice, here.
+Double suspension points.
+Missing space.
Twice, here.
+that's
+these?
+Missing space.
Twice, here.
Triple.
+Missing space.
+Missing space.
Twice, here.
+Missing comma and ‘but’ in the marked area.
because?
+heard
Twice, here.
+Mentioning the ‘not believe’ part in the same context twice.
+until?
+Missing space.
+Missing comma behind ‘did’.
+an
Twice, here.
Lowercase i should be uppercase.
Unnecessary space.
can't
Remove ‘already’.
have
lose
an
General note: You seem to have a bad habit of not putting a space behind suspension points (...).