A human, tumbling from his own harsh world, falls into the colourful land of Equestria but soon comes to learn that you better dont expect neither good or bad before turning the first page.
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indenture servitude might be better but ouch.
If you need an editor, I can help.
well I'm off to go gather an army to either Kill Celestia or hold her accountable for her crimes!
All I have to do is mobilize the droid army!
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Time to mobilize the invasion forces for Canterlot:
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I have a mad god and a self-sacrificial martyr-type weapon. Choose.
NOTE: When I add a question mark at the end of what I think is a mistake, it means I am not entirely certain.
Lowercase i should be uppercase.
calm?
an
which
Double quotation marks.
she
Add either a G or an apostrophe.
Double exclamation mark.
Missing comma behind ‘drinking’?
venom-filled?
an
wasn't/was not?
bits
You mentioned in an earlier comment that you are German, so I will just add that an amount of currency other than 1 is referred to as plural in English.
that day?
an (the H is silent)
Umm? Why is he so submissive of this entire situation?
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Fixed, hehe.
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Well he is in a world where he knows that ponies have the power and if he acts up too much he could get potentially killed.