Maybe it would be weird if they don't know about evolving, but I liked the idea of them being suprised about it.

“In every dungeon; there’s a barrier to prevent monsters from escaping.” Skills widen his eyes (All of them)

“I was born here and a monster who residence in this dungeon.” Skills backed away and slump on the ground “I… I can’t leave this place.”

I hope that is not a real thing in the manga and I still hope they can get him out of there, that would be a bit dissapointing if he "has" to stay there all his life.

“I was born here and a monster who residence in this dungeon.” Skills backed away and slump on the ground “I… I can’t leave this place.”

Dont lose hope all you gotta do is beat the boss then you can leave. Right?
(it sounds like an awesome idea huh huh huh)

Me: Okay so the exit has a barrier that keeps me in... I'll make my own exit then!

I take back what i said, the grammar is horrible, you need a proofreader.

By Celestia everflaming cunt ,your humor is magnificent. I stay in awe Please keep up the good work up

Wait a second! didnt Skills had already heresy magic!? Please correct that error

Yay Ponymeat for Skills. His first decent meal.

The plot is good but you keep randomly switching from 1°person to 3°person sometimes and that's irritating to some degree.

Didn't he already have Heresy Magic?

Great work

The definition of a monster for me would be a Nobel prick destroying other lifes for fun...

Grammerly sure was helping a lot
Well done!

“Just watch me and cover your eyes.” Skills crawled out as he looked at the light. “Time to work the magic.” Skill focus his thoughts “Light Bomb.” A small orb of light appeared in my front legs as I tossed it at the group of hired help as the light bomb blew up; blinding the hidden fighters. Skills ran fast as he unleashed his web nets and captures them as they struggled to get free. “NOW!” Katie and Brandy charged from behind the rock as Brandy beheaded a warrior and mage as Brandy blasted one through the heart as Skills poisoned some with his Poison Fang move.

That is literally contradictory. Unless they have see trough eye protection

The rapid acquiring of skills makes sence, but not how fast they level up. Maybe add before the fight of the Mole and the Mercenarys a few minor fight?