Ambitious, and I hope it will also prove rewarding for you and your readers both.

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You and me, both. It's the cost of trying to make sense out of something that originally didn't made sense.
Let's hope once i get started on Fall of Cadence it keeps like that.

Eh... you're gonna get alot of dislikes because of the genre you're using.

It could use some spell check, Im guessing thats where most of the downvotes come from.

Well, let's see how this re-write goes then on the side while reading something else.

Also noticed one or two typos, like "P4incess Celestia". Probably finger hit the 4-key instead of R-key? It happens.

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or the fact people hate the Caribou Genre.

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When is the next chapter?

You're not necessarily a bad writer, but Fall Of Equestria is despised.

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Already has. That's the why i ignore them UNLESS it's specified through the comments wyy the dislike. It helps to improve.

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Most of this was written in a cellphone, not on my laptop like i used to.

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To be honest, i don't know. Already started to work on it, but... i think you should see the author's notes.

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Thanks for the compliment, and yes, FoE is despised generally. But hey, can you actually stop the water from flowing?

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Yea, but how can you improve if those dislikers remain quiet?

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Once again, ignored. Unless it's given a good reason or the dislike, i ussualy ignore them or care little for them. Mainly because, you know: haters, trolls or misters "i don't like it because reasons".

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I re-started it because I wanted to give it more connections with other things, like my story of Chrysalis and the Fall of Cadence. This was done with the objective of giving it some more sense of what little it had before and give it more story than what it already had.
Of course, i'm not perfect, and you have all the reasons in the world to question it, seeing as it also benefits on the improving of the writing as it makes ME question on the why's.
Thanks for your question by the way.

I like

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I mean, good luck. I'd be wary though. Using so much of another author's text feels borderline sleazy to me as a thing to do, even when you have permission. It's like, there's fanfiction, and then there's copying the text of novels, tacking on minor additions, and reselling them.

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Thanks for the like, then.

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"I only care if I am given a reason," you say, right before continuing on with, "People who downvote it 'because reasons' don't matter to me."

You're an idiot and that's why your story is being downvoted.

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Your not being nice you bad human being you. JK, love you bro. I'll suck you off later.

But you's a bitch.

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Okay, i think i might have expressed myself wrongly. People have every right to hit like or dislike on whatever they want, and that's perfectly fine. But in the sense that i ignore them is because a simple dislike doesn't help me improve. Critics are what help improve, and a simple dislike is not a critic. While i have in mind those dislikes, i value more the critics, like the ones you gave.

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"Because reasons" is usually shorthand for people who claim to have rational, objective ones but don't want to explain what they are, often enough because they actually don't have any.

Have you never come across this saying?

Uhm, you are aware that you might get your story deleted right? The rules of the sight say you can't continue another persons story, even if you got their permission. So yeah, just wondering if your aware of these facts.

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Yes, i'm aware. But rules stipulate that plagism and intentional copying for self-benefit are prohibited. I'm not stealing this, so it's not up for deleting.
Thanks for the warning, by the way.

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well ok, if you say so.

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Nontheless, thanks for the warning and the interest.

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This isn't a continuation. This is very clearly a reboot. If it was against the rules, it likely wouldn't even have gotten through the approval process to begin with.

Ok, so I decided to give this a bit of a read to see if this redo of the Twilight Falls story is at all an improvement over the original. I have also noticed that the writer of this has stated that they will ignore any negative comments that aren't constructive, so I'm going to do my best to give only opinions and thoughts that would be helpful to this story, negative as they may be.

First tip: FIMFiction now has a text to speech function on the site, and if you use it after you've writing out your story it REALLY helps to find your spelling errors. That being said, I'll try to point out a few in this comment before I use a separate one for the story review.

On to the misspellings!

The spring planting festival’s afternoon was judst short of perfect.

"judst"

and the ponies velow knew there was still a lot of time before the festival ended

"velow"

One group of ponies on the street, one of the most famous through all of Equestria, was out in tje streets, also enjoying and partaking on the many entertainments.

"tje"

Twilight laughed as she watched Rainbow and Applejack almost drowning on the pile of water,

Water doesn't come in "piles"

Of course, their laughing increased as applejack’s fur changed to a tone similar to rainbow’s, while the later had started to turn a darker shade of blue.

Capitalize the names, remove the double spacing

“Girls! It’s almost time! P4incess Celestia is about to make her blessings in an hour!” Twilight shouted, which caught her friends’ attention.

If you don't see it, then there is a problem here....

“I don’t know! It’s the biggiest and strongiest I’ve ever felt. And I think it’s telling me it’s gonna be 4ight here in Canterlot, during the festival’s blessings!” As she said the last part, while confused, her friends also smiled.

"Biggiest" and "Strongiest", unless you were trying to have Pinkie use cutesy made up words. Also, the problem continues.

But thw lack of oxygen on her body was no excuse to stop herself from enjoying the heavenly bucking of her masters. It was just so good.

"thw" and another double space

She started to think of all her books in exotic species known through the world. And then, one species came to her: Caribous.

Not how you pluralize "caribou"

That's all I could find just reading, but there are probably more. Now that I have gotten through this, I'll post my opinions about this another comment. I must be channeling Pinkie Pie though, cause it's gonna be a doozy.

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This was actually pretty helpful. Can't write very well with the stupid phone's mini keyboard, and it led to this.
Anyways, thanks once again for the help, seeing as i went ahead as a subnormal and left it like that.

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When is the next chapter?

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Dude, who the hell takes a pornographic fanfic so seriously?

A true happy smile formed as she realized that it would be the happiest day of her life.

The day she realized the magic of male dominance and slavery is a happy one.