The Princesses find themselves at war with their neighouring countries. Celestia seeks help from the only human on Equs, so her kingdom wont crumble under the influences of her foes. At first quite silly, but quickly turns into a more serious plot.
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She mad.
RRRUUUNNN BBBIIIITTTCCCCHHHH RRRRRUUUUUUNNNNN!!!!
It's a prank to die for!
Overpopulation? Earth does not suffer from overpopulation.
*Ahem..* All shall love her and despair!
"Halls" doesn't make sense to me. Perhaps, you meant some other verb, such as "Celestia's angry yelling reverberates through her room (or hall?)"? As far as I can tell, the verb "hall" does not exist.
On a side note, why did you choose to use the present tense? Not that it sounds bad or necessarily takes anything away, but I feel like the story would flow more smoothly in the past tense (though changing it now is more work than it's worth).
Regardless, another entertaining chapter—though I think we need to get back into the action and main plot, soon. There's only so many shenanigans you can have until the gritty stuff has to kick in again!
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Thanks for your comment! Really appreciate it :)
I fixed the 'halls' error. And yes im a bit troubled my the tenses as well. I started the fic with present tense only but the past tense would indeed give the story a better flow.
Maybe I will change it in the future...and yes, don't worry about the gritty stuff. Joseph isn't as save as he thinks he is.
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That's what they want you to think. Stay woke💯
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GET THE HOSE, DAMMIT
I love the effort you put into the pictures like the cake and newspaper.
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thaaanks <3 :)
pics broke, does anyone know what it said before?
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sigh.... I sadly dont have the pic anymore.
it was something silly
something like "sorry i grabbed your horn like that, next time I will be more gentle"